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April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sorry for your troubles. yes, it would be good if you can crank out a chapter soon.
thank you.
thank you.
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely FANTASTIC! I have read quite literally hundreds of fanfics, but this one by far is my favorite so far! I really hope that you continue writing and updating! Keep up the beyond excellent work!!
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi! lol i actually created a login name just so i could review this story and say I MUST HAVE MORE! LOL.........i love it! great plot ty for not diving right into the smut, its nice to have a story line
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August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you've been given pretty good advice grammar and layout wise, so I'm going to
cut to the chase with my main concern.
This story has potential, but not as it stands. Frankly, if I were IY, I'd drop this
Kagome faster than you could spit. She's whiney, selfish, demanding, controlling, and
immature. It's all about what she wants, and if IY disagrees, SIT. This is not funny.
A true relationship will never happen as long as this continues. They never talk, just
constantly bicker and fight. Are you sure that your Kagome and IY really even like each
other, because I'm just not seeing it.
An overhaul would do wonders for this story, cutting the snarkiness and sarcasm, and
showing just why they want to be together, and how they work to achieve that.
Drop the sits, grow them up, and let them, and us, see just what wonderful things happen
when they become real.
cut to the chase with my main concern.
This story has potential, but not as it stands. Frankly, if I were IY, I'd drop this
Kagome faster than you could spit. She's whiney, selfish, demanding, controlling, and
immature. It's all about what she wants, and if IY disagrees, SIT. This is not funny.
A true relationship will never happen as long as this continues. They never talk, just
constantly bicker and fight. Are you sure that your Kagome and IY really even like each
other, because I'm just not seeing it.
An overhaul would do wonders for this story, cutting the snarkiness and sarcasm, and
showing just why they want to be together, and how they work to achieve that.
Drop the sits, grow them up, and let them, and us, see just what wonderful things happen
when they become real.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story, though parts of it are very long-winded and lost my interest, such as the extensive search for clothes for InuYasha. Also, you are in need of a good Beta.
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June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update please!!!i love it!!!
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this plz update soon
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a suggestion, a story posted in more places has more exposure.
other popular sites:
mediaminer[dot]org, destinysgateway[dot]com, fichaven[dot]org, fanfiction[dot]net
more places means more feedback. more happy reviews!
ciao!
ginny
other popular sites:
mediaminer[dot]org, destinysgateway[dot]com, fichaven[dot]org, fanfiction[dot]net
more places means more feedback. more happy reviews!
ciao!
ginny
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June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*ebil grin* I love the kag and inu bickering/fighting in the latest chapter. Cute ^^
Keep it up! I can't wait to see what else happens.
Keep it up! I can't wait to see what else happens.
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June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with your story so far!! I really hope that your write much more! And soon! Lol