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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, well, I must say: Bravo!!
Now that, that's out of the way, let's get down to the nitty gritty. I believe this story has alot of potental! I really do. And yes, I have two stories posted...so please don't ge upset at me...hehehe. I'm just teasing. Me being a girl, I understand the anger with that, but being an author...you kinda get used to those kinds of Review's and you just learn to ignore. XP
Sometimes, I just get pissy and don't write for months. But anyways, I got side tracked..hahaha. In your story, which is alittle tiny winy short, I think Inuyasha should so just dominant over Kagome. Like take charge in bed and get her back. Ooooh, that would be so freaken awesome.
Have Inuyasha just take Kagome rough, hard, and leaving Reader's totally at your mercy..hehehe.
But anyways please continue. Ignore the snide remarks of the rude Reviewer's, you'll do just fine and if you have trouble with writing some parts: Just email me. That's it. I'll help ya out. If you need some ideas too, go and check out my stories. They can help with creativity and inspiration. Hahaha, I do that too. So don't feel bad. Reading other Author's stories helped me alot.
Well, update!! I'll be forced to leave long Review's on here if you don't!! Got that!!!
Now that, that's out of the way, let's get down to the nitty gritty. I believe this story has alot of potental! I really do. And yes, I have two stories posted...so please don't ge upset at me...hehehe. I'm just teasing. Me being a girl, I understand the anger with that, but being an author...you kinda get used to those kinds of Review's and you just learn to ignore. XP
Sometimes, I just get pissy and don't write for months. But anyways, I got side tracked..hahaha. In your story, which is alittle tiny winy short, I think Inuyasha should so just dominant over Kagome. Like take charge in bed and get her back. Ooooh, that would be so freaken awesome.
Have Inuyasha just take Kagome rough, hard, and leaving Reader's totally at your mercy..hehehe.
But anyways please continue. Ignore the snide remarks of the rude Reviewer's, you'll do just fine and if you have trouble with writing some parts: Just email me. That's it. I'll help ya out. If you need some ideas too, go and check out my stories. They can help with creativity and inspiration. Hahaha, I do that too. So don't feel bad. Reading other Author's stories helped me alot.
Well, update!! I'll be forced to leave long Review's on here if you don't!! Got that!!!