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I must say I'm impressed, and that I am hooked on this fic. Your voice and perspnality really seem to shine through and I can tell you really pour yourself into this. Anyways, the part with shippou was nice I'm glad he is starting to learn. The inuyasha love scene between kagome's freind, was great! I laughed my butt off. "I bet she never gave him decent head" lol if she only knew. Keep up the good work and thanks for the fast update.

feh! grrrrr you always do those cliffy's

oh yeah. way to piss of this sango.

grrrrr

lol HURRY!

holy fuking **** good stuff right just got done readin all of the chapters of each story and i have too say WOWESERS good stuff good stuff keep up good work and update cuz if u dont ill eat u.... lol W/E cya around

I just spend 2 days reading the your saga. I couldn't seem to make myself, it was like a drug. The lemons were excellent and I think I found like two grammical errors from all three works, just amazing. I like where your going with this whole naraku plot, I think it will really work for the plot. I don't I have ever laughes as hard at shippou, will he ever learn and grow up a smidge? Good thing sango finally wised up or it seemed like there was gonna be hell to pay lol. Keep up the GREAT work I can't wait for your update.

great I really enjoyed the update

Well at least Shippo is finally learning not to rush into his questions. It's a good thing he's not pouting instantly and throwing a tantrum, either, that Kagome's not there. He really needs to take more from Rin's influence, though. Loved how one stern look from Sesshomaru silenced him, though! He knows who will lay down the law, doesn't he? The assassin sounded a lot like Bankotsu, yet didn't have half his charm (if such a person can have that. I rather liked Bankotsu for the brief period he was in the manga arc.) I thought it was nice that Kaede was the one to figure he was probably hired by Naraku. I'm sure it's crossed a few of the other's minds. And I liked how Miroku was thinking of the “pack” when he tried to get Shippo to stop asking questions before Koga could find out by accident in another Shippo-blurt about her true time. He knows how dangerous that would be! Even if Koga's an ally, it's just not a good idea for him to know. Naraku is going to have one of the biggest shocks this time. He's all set up to watch his traps unfold, and all he needs is his popcorn, but when he gets his main feature he'll be sorely sorry. And I have to say, for all the talk about the “best assassin to walk the earth,” he certainly didn't seem as impressed with him as he led on. He figures that his new pawn has enough skill to kill off Sesshomaru, but not enough to eliminate him. IF he believed in the assassin as much as he touted him, he would have thought twice about hiring him. It's obvious that regardless of what happened with Inuyasha and Kagome that our little spider planned his pawn's death from the beginning. I am rather surprised, though, that he didn't simply absorb the guy and spit him back out as a re-useable pawn that he can dispose of at will. He may have promised Keikaiyari the Western Lands, but I doubt had he actually succeeded Keikkaiyari would have enjoyed them! I felt really bad for Mama as she had to watch Kagome be taken care of. How Kagome, though, to be less concerned about her own wounds than if Inuyasha was alright or not. I liked how they managed to get their messages straight on Inuyasha's current status. Now, the lying she did was wonderful. Makes me wish she had lied so well in the third movie about saying sit. I swear, I've wanted to send a few of the Inuyasha Cast to Lying 101, Naraku first on the list, actually. He's an awful liar sometimes. Speaking of expert lying! Just WHERE did Souta learn how to do that? He ought to teach our little spider better techniques. I liked how he was also unafraid of transformed Inuyasha, knowing it was something that happened because he wanted to keep her safe. And the panic over his sword, great. I've always wondered why he walks around her time, goes to her school, wanders through the streets, ect, and no one EVER seems to notice that he's got a sword. I liked how Sesshomaru wanted answers, but used his better judgment on reviving him. That does make me wonder, though, if Naraku won't be able to salvage something and use a jewel shard on our tiger, ala Band of Seven. I wonder how much of the bones Sesshomaru melted, if it was complete enough. Poor Inuyasha, trapped at the hospital with his hurt mate. Hell, he doesn't even really know how to say the damn word. Nice touch having him give her blood, yet be so shy about it at the same time. And does he ever need to get his mind outta the gutter. CUDDLE, not have sex, silly, when it comes to warming up. Sheesh. Way to go Sesshomaru, realizing that the Inu gang is a bit more powerful than he had ever wanted to admit before. Yay! Koga, Koga, Koga. What ever will we do with him. At least he had the good sense not to rag on Inuyasha too, too much after Sesshomaru growled. He needs to learn to hold his tongue just as much as Shippo does. Mama sure was surprised to find all those diamonds. I have a funny feeling they probably have the worth alone to set Kagome and everyone at the shrine up for life. Good sense on that nurse's part, not kicking Inuyasha out of that bed with his mate. It would have gotten ugly, fast. Yay, the joy of bladders! At least he could help her there even if she did kick him out. Kaede, so wise, she knows that Sesshomaru does anything and everything for Rin, even if he won't admit it. Tricking him into breakfast cause she knows Rin will want to see him, that's almost mean. And now with Kikyo there, I wonder what Sesshomaru will say to her. It'll be interesting to say the least. And now I must go off and make my own story WORK. Argh.

O I'm sorry I usually dont read the authors notes unless i'm up to date.. like if I start a story and they are already on chapter eight.. I wont usually read the authors nots for those chapters that have been posted a while. :)

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another update. kool

He OMG I love it when Inuyasha goes all full demon.. when it comes to Kagome hurt or in danger.. OMG I LOVE IT when he says MINE Hey if it isnt to much trouble could you contact me when you update? Frappolvr@yahoo.com :)

Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to read the shock Naraku goes through when he finds out he is wrong about Inusaha and Kagome.