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haha i thought you were going to say that she was pregnant! hahhhhhh i didn't know if i was scared about that or not lol

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Alright, I better finish getting caught up. What a sight Koga found, huh? I wonder if he knows that Sesshomaru's the one that melted the tiger down to goo. I still have to wonder, though, if there really isn't something Naraku can do with the remains, goo or not. We know he's resourceful, after all. Silly cops, thinking Inuyasha had something to do with Kagome getting hurt. ..as if he'd hurt her on purpose. Glad they figured it out. Stupid Eri. Can't leave them alone, and now she has to run off and tell everyone that she thinks Inu's not human. Gah. Can't she get her own life? Good cover by Yuka saying that Inuyasha can have that done through plastic surgery. Ah, the ever observant Sesshomaru. He knows that Naraku's up to no good, but he also is so curious about things going on around him. Good for him to know that Inuyasha always returns to Kagome no matter what. Uh oh, Sesshomaru realized he's, ahem, a bit too attached to our Rin, eh? Too bad. Again, Kagome is such a smooth liar here with that doctor. Still makes me wish she could do that well in the series. Love how Kagome wants to defend Inuyasha from those silly boys at school who think he's foreign. If they only knew. . .Inuyasha really needs to get a book on how to control that guilt of his. Sheesh. Glad he's got Kagome to stop him. And uh oh, loved how Kagome wanted to, ahem, spend some time with Inuyasha and he had to point out her mother behind them. Embarrassing I'll say. Finally Sango's figuring out that she should apologize to poor Miroku for what she's done. She should realize that he would want to touch her after what they've shared, but not always in a perverted manner. Good thing she's coming to her senses. Poor confused Miroku. He just doesn't know what to do. I've always thought, as much as he flirts, he's never actually done anything. I'm glad they finally could talk about that and get that out of their systems. Maybe they can finally start to build a real, trusting relationship! Way to go Yuka and Ayume, going over there to ask and talk with Inuyasha and Kagome first, before doing something stupid. I'm glad they were willing to accept them because they're her friends and not use it against them. And love how grandpa finally accepted Inuyasha because he did the honorable thing and asked permission for the ceremony. Ooo. Exciting to see Totosai show up. A jeweler, eh. He'd be well suited for the job, that's for sure. Love how Inuyasha had to choke back a few laughs. Poor thing had to have a hard time there. And the ring and necklace sounds beautiful. Oh my, Totosai knows more than he's letting on. That sneaky demon! Mama's pretty smart. And Inuyasha's always so shy about gifts. Poor thing. Yay! Sesshomaru and Rin make it to the present. That's cute. And Inuyasha caught on all those years ago? I dunno. He just doesn't seem to be the type to piece it together, but maybe he actually PAID ATTENTION for a change. I'm sure if he uses those eyes he can figure it out. And Sesshomaru knew he was being laughed at. Too funny. Nice to see Miroku and Inuyasha get a chance to talk. They do share a nice bond as friends, and I think it sometimes gets lost in the shuffle of things. That silly monk should realize by now he's not all that misunderstood. He's the one that keeps getting in trouble, after all. Oh my, I'm glad Kagome gave Kikyo the benefit of the doubt, but I know I'd still be pretty wary about the whole affair. After all, she still is responsible for Inuyasha's imprisonment in that cave, at least partly. It may give her a chance to atone for it, perhaps? And Rin wants to learn how to read and write. That's cute. Sesshomaru should have taken the time to teach her years ago, though. I love how Totosai is scared off by a big aura. Maybe it's how he's lived so long? Poor Inuyasha, thinking Totosai would take more fangs. Goof. Oh dear. Kikyo did not expect to land on her ass, did she? Smooth. I always wondered why the manga, and the anime especially, makes it seem that Kikyo is the stronger of the two, while Kagome is supposedly powerless. Kikyo has less power, I think, but has the training, which is her advantage. We know that Kagome has more power, because she's affected Naraku with it in much more damaging ways than Kikyo's, she just lacks the proper tutelage to do some of the things Kikyo does. It was nice to see someone acknowledge that about her. Oh dear. Totosai and Myoga should realize talking about Inuyasha right in front of him is not a good idea! Yay for Kikyo understanding that mikos CAN have power even if they take a lover. She could have saved herself so much trouble if she had realized that a lot sooner. I like the feudal era phone sex. That was hot, even if it wasn't an actual lemon, and I loved how Myoga WANTED to talk to him but Totosai figured out that Inuyasha was ahem, a little busy. Oh my. Sesshomaru is jealous already. That somehow does not surprise me. Oh dear. Inuyasha's a panty thief! Somehow that doesn't surprise me. Uh oh. Naraku's watching! I wonder what he'll learn. Miroku is trying to get himself killed asking them what was going on under that barrier...somethings never change. Naraku's been had! He still has no idea what's in store for him and he's busy buying his popcorn for the main feature. Too bad he won't enjoy it. Leave it to Miroku to realize that Sesshomaru meant the more that Inuyasha and Kagome have sex, the more likely they'll share power. And the lemon was hot, as always. The well is an interesting choice to, well, do that. Sesshomaru's not nearly as observant as he should be. He should know that Rin can read him like a book, at least for the most part. She knows when he's troubled and pleased and anything else. I think I really like the relationship Sesshomaru and Kaede have established. There's a quiet respect, and dare I say a trust building there? He knows that Kaede is an old woman, but not weak, either. Oh dear. That would have been an awful scene, having to pick splinters out of Kagome's butt after all that hot sex. And now Kohaku has arrived. I wonder what will happen there. I'm curious, because I think this takes place before Kohaku ends up traveling with Sesshomaru in the manga. Is he still holding a grudge here against Kohaku for nearly killing Rin under Naraku's control? I will be curious to find out. And now I am all caught up.

as always frikken amazin cant wait for next chappie...! keep up the good work

Finally, here are the reviews you deserve! My, my. That nurse sure should have listened to Inuyasha when he asked her to check the chart. Would it have been so hard to read it and then find out you don't need to give the stupid injection, no matter what the schedule says? Sheesh. Inuyasha might not have a clue as how modern medicine works, but he sure knew enough that Kagome shouldn't get another dose. That nurse is lucky he didn't turn full demon her. And I'm glad the doctor sided with him and didn't try to throw him out. Kagome sleeping through all of that makes it almost certain that no one would be able to stop him if he transformed. Kikyo stubborn as always. Why does she insist, just like EVERY other character that she's the ONLY one who can beat Naraku? Honestly, they oughta take realize by now that there are strength in numbers and that if they all worked together his ass would be grass. I like how Sesshomaru finally admitted that to himself, and acknowledged that Kagome is very strong, no matter what Kikyo wants to think. I like how Kaede stood up to her, rather than letting her get away with intimidation and the like. It's nice to see Souta be Inuyasha's friend while he has to be away from Kagome. And of course, Inuyasha gets his favorite snack. If he can't kill or be with his mate, food is a good fall back. Ugh, not Kagome's friends again. Gah! Eri shouldn't touch Inuyasha! At least Ayume knows better. Daaaaaaamn Eri has no class. Kagome? Prude? Poor, poor Inuyasha. And he had to overhear all of it. Loved how Inuyasha confused the fact that Kagome might not be “decent” not realizing it meant clothes. Poor thing. Aww good to see Kagome up again and getting much much better. But did Eri HAVE to show up again? Eww. Come on, girl. He's taken! I can't believe she said she'd try to take Inuyasha away in front of Kagome. She's lucky she didn't get her ass purified or something. Love Inuyasha's explosion once the stupid girl leaves. Gah. Like Eri'd even come close to being good enough for him. Oh no, NOW Kagome's pissed. If I'm Eri, I'm running right now. Oh Sango. She should make up her mind on what she wants. Poor thing, so confused. She wants him but she doesn't. . .sigh. And she's confusing Miroku. What's he supposed to do? Get hit and practically rape her? Sheesh. Those crazy kids will have to figure it out, I guess. Enter Koga the diplomat. He's dense, but he still has some smarts enough to know when there's something going on! I hope Sango will tell him what the hell he did wrong..confused monks can leap to very bad conclusions very quickly. And good for Shippo, even if he did kind of mess up. He's starting to learn..at least a little. Good to see Sesshomaru try to put the pieces together. He knows Naraku plays games to get his way and uses others to do his dirty work. He's half way there! Kagome oughta know by now that Inuyasha will baby her to no end. Loved how he swept her off her feet. Liked how Kagome tried to explain western traditions to Inuyasha. Go Mama, telling Inuyasha what he needed to hear. He needs to know it's not his fault! Uh oh, that whole time separation thing..not good. The ever curious and concerned Sesshomaru. .. he'll never admit it. Of course he had to go see why Inuyasha was so upset! It's nice to see everyone concerned about Inuyasha for a change. Not just Kagome. They can tell he's not holding up well without Kagome in the same time. Koga don't do that! Oi. He's not very bright sometimes, I take it back. Sesshomaru still maintains he'll be the one to kill Inuyasha, huh? Interesting. So Koga's gonna find out finally. That should really bake his noodle. Figures Koga'd try the well first thing. Goof Good to know Sesshomaru has realize he doesn't kill in front of Rin unless he has to. He knows she's seen enough and been through enough already. That evil Eri! How can she do that! Well about time she got the hint. Nothing like watching Inuyasha and Kagome go at eachother like bunnies. I hope she knows better now! And the lemon? Hot as always. I think I'll get the other chapters in a bit. . .I'm so far behind, sigh.

Whoa! Kohaku made an appearance! Great! So I take it from the flash forward that Rin will get with Shosmaru in the future, so Shippou will not be a "problem". Just thought I'd ask. Away great well lemon, I had never considered that location before, good job. Nice timing with Naraku's minion BTW, really cool how that whole thing worked out. I can't wait for the battle, but that means that this fic would be over and that would be make me very sad. Oh and by the way, thanks for the shout out and the answers to my questions. Keep the good work and update soon.

WOW that chap was sooooooooooo cute i wish i had my own lil inuyasha.. but don't we all. Any who i have to hand it to you that was great chappie

I loooove this chapter, just having Kikyo knocked on her butt was great! I can't wait to see the next chapter.

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Great update, and I loved the lime. That was "almost" fedual era phone sex, lol. Anyway the training kikyo was wonddeful and really showed kagomes power, good wokr in that area. I like the fact that you decided to include the details ot the ring making, that was very interesting. Keep up the great work and don't get too confused by the time travel aspect. Update soon!

I just wanted to tell you how much I love this story. I ran across it monday when I was looking for something different to read. I read one of your one-shots first and loved them so I started on your Live and Let Die series and fell in love! Normally I'm a yaoi fan but I just can't get enough of this story and can't wait until you write the next chapter! Keep up the good work.