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schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright, I can finally make time to review the latest chapters. I love how Rin just totally understands the emotions of those around her and is growing. She feels bad for Sango, and her empathy is just beautiful. I love how Inuyasha's confused about Kagome's display of emotions and how he's not always sure what her crying might mean. The poor thing just has to go with it, I guess. And of course the lemon was nice and hot, but sweet and tender all at once. I like how he's learning to read her and know what she wants to make their relationship on all levels enjoyable. Nice of Kaede to notice that Sango and Miroku needed one another. Thank-god Shippo did, too! And wonderful how she is getting to know both Rin and Sesshomaru well enough to know that they, too, love one another. She's very wise to pick up on those things. And what a naughty inu Inuyasha is to be between Kagome's breasts when her mother is trying to talk to her! Way to go Miroku growing enough to comfort her without letting his hands get him into trouble! Yay. It's a nice touch! Oh my. Poor Inuyasha and the train. I can only imagine how unfun that might be for him. All the smells and the crowding and everything. GAH. Kagome's dress sounds beautiful and I am sure that Inuyasha will love it! Oh NO! Inuyasha has been defeated by a rack of bras and panties. Take it from me, those stupid racks are a pain in the ASS. I should know after spending two months moving the dumb things around---without wheels on most of them, too. I feel his pain! Seems Inuyasha has an eye for what he knows---traditional wear. Probably the first time he's liked shopping at all! Inuyasha in a tux just sound hot, too. Sigh. It's not fair that we'll never get to have our own sexy inu hanyou! Soooo Sesshomaru gets his shoes custom made and Inuyasha got lucky to find a pair on hand for him. Oh my. Seems I was right about not wanting to go back and tell Naraku you can't find Sango and Kohaku. He's not a happy spider, is he? Funny how Totosai isn't willing to get close to the group until Sesshomaru gives the Okay. I don't blame him. After all he has had trouble with our dear Demon Lord in the past. Sighs in frustration as Shippo has to get in someone's face AGAIN because he's just being a brat. When will he seriously LEARN to behave and stay that way? I don't think his groveling is going to get him any points. He's just sad that his plan didn't work, at least right now he is. The rings themselves sound beautitful. And so very fitting! I love how Naraku's incarnation raise the question about how he'll live if Naraku is dead. It is a rather good question! Smart of Totosai to build in that precaution for those rings. He may seem absentminded but he's not! Shippo's in so much trouble this time, I think when Inuyasha's done, Sesshomaru might have a few things to say! And I don't feel sorry for him at all. Yay for Sess and Adult Rin going to the same shoe shop! And it's nice to know that Sess has managed to keep his usual demeanor for the most part! What a sweet husband he is to ask if she wanted more than one pair, though. Sooo cute! And Kikyo is growing so well. I like how she is understanding that Kagome is stronger than she gave credit and that the reason she and Inuyasha didn't make it was due to lack of trust. And no one really had to torment her to get that answer, she just came upon it on her own. Uh oh, Kagome has doubts again! And Inuyasha's grown so much to actually be able to tell her why he won't stay around when Kikyo shows up. Yay! Love how Inuyasha can share some things in their telepathic link that he couldn't otherwise. Aww. Poor Sango. She feels bad that she is in the way of Kikyo showing up because of Kohaku. I hoep someone can convince her otherwise, because while Kikyo is afraid of Kohaku's shard being tainted, it's not Sango's fault! Yay for Koga finally admitting that he remembered his promise to Ayame and will not be with her instead. It's about time he grew up and let Kagome go! I can't wait to see what these two end up doing after he loses his shards and has to be strong on his own. I'm glad that Shippo isn't getting any sympathy from anyone. He was a snot and now he's pouting because he knows he's in big, big trouble. It's his own fault, anyways. I still don't have any pity for him and I assume Inuyasha's punishment will be bad! Awwwwww. Souta wants to be just like Inuyasha and got a suit to match. That's adorable! I'm glad Jiichan has gotten used to Inuyasha and Kagome and is willing to preform that ceremony quickly. I can't wait to see what happens when those rings are put on. And yay for Kagome's wedding kimono. It's beautiful! I love how Miroku and Sango's relationship is growing so slowly and wonderfully. Their bond is strong, even if they've had a lot to overcome. They're just so sweet! I'm glad that Kagome is upset with Shippo and won't let it just slide or ask for Inuyasha to go easy on him. It just wouldn't be right. Funny how Inuyasha's shredded socks with his toes. I wonder if Sesshomaru has the same problem with his socks or doesn't he wear any? Ooooo the reception. I can't wait and I wonder what they'll do when they meet Sess and Rin again. I wonder what Sess looks like in his “humanized” form. It'll be interesting to say the least!
person XxSangoxX *NSI*
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it.
person NateR
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read the entire 3 parts of live and let die, I can see why you won all those awards now. That was so great, update soon!
person youkia_girl 0u812
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please up date soon it's KILLLLLING me to find out what going to happen at the party. lol good job though.
person L80hawk
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is my first review, so I'll keep it short. I have been faithfully waiting for this new chapter; your description of the bands Totosai created was so unique and clever, and I am anxious to see how they will react in battle or if Kagome and Inuyasha are seperated. Will someone later attempt to remove the bands that bond them?I have been so anxious for the reception scene and the reunion of the future Sesshomaru and Rin with Inuyasha and Kagome, but alas another cliffy. Shippo's challenge is also an interesting twist, how will the hanyou react when they return from the future?

Kudos for a really great fic! I can't wait for the next update, keep them coming!
person inuyasha831
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DUM DUN DUM....we finally know that Rin and Fluffy get together… as if it wasn't obvious before! lol. I'm glad Shippou will finally learn his place in the group especially after the stunt he pulled; BTW that was a very cool scene with Inuyasha's whole reaction, good job. Most of the time when I was reading that last chapter, I kept thinking that inuyasha was going to turn human and Naraku's spy was going to find them, but it didn't happen. Oh well it turned out fine with out it. You are really starting to tie up all the loose ends with the group, i.e. Inuyasha's feeling for Kikyo and Kohaku/ Sango relationship, it’s nice to have everything nice and neat. I can't wait for the wedding that will truly be an amazing chapter. You did give one thing away about the final battle though...we now know that Fluffy and Rin survive so I will take that to mean that the good guys win. Ha! I figured it out lol. Update soon and have a happy new year!
person inuyasha831
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, loved this update, gomen that it took me so long to RR, finals are keeping me running around. The shopping scenes were good very realistic and you gave great detail which was awasome is every respect. When inuyasha fell into the underwear shelf I laughed my ass off, well done. I would like to see more progress with sango and miroku all they seem to ever do is console one another, i'm not asking for more lemons between them just that thier relationship should move on. I can't wait to see where you take Rin in this story, with your creativity there is no telling, but I know it will be great. Update soon, I await the wedding chapter. Keep up the Great Work!
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD I HAVE BEEN FOLLOWING YOUR STORIES SIENCE THE BEGINNING LIVE AND LET DIE IS THE BEST FANFICTION EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE
person inuyasha831
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice update, the fluff was a nice change, and the mystry with naraku is starting to become very intersting, keep it up; I can't wait for the wedding. Happy Thanksgiving BTW
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well it looks like it's my turn to give a review. Love how Inuyasha's got a goofy grin on his face about Mama telling them to take a shower together. It just sounds cute, and of course, sexy. And how nice of Mama to buy him some new clothes. Such a motherly thing to do. Poor Kagome, she's still embarrassed about peeing in front of him. That's funny. Now that they're in the shower, seems it's less about cleaning than it is about some more sex. Oh my, and it is hot, too. Well, Mama did encourage them, after all. . .Wise of Koga to send his friends and pack away from the village AND Jaken and Ah-Un. No telling what Jaken might say if he should see Koga. I don't think it would be pretty. Oh dear, I think he just figured out Sesshomaru wouldn't hesitate to kick his ass---not to mention succeed. Poor Koga, no respect. It's nice to see Sango and Kohaku finally reunited. The poor boy needs some love and support in his life. It's so sad that he'd think his sister would be angry with him! Oh my. Souta is a little excited, isn't he? My, my. Jumping in his future brother-in-law's lap. That's cute that he's so happy Inuyasha's going to marry his sister. Yay for Kagome realizing that sometimes Inuyasha gets tongue-tied, not that he's doubting his choice. He's not big on those kind of things, especially when he has to think on his feet! Uh-oh. I wouldn't want to be Naraku's incarnation and have to return to him to tell him the bad news. I'm not sure Naraku will be very forgiving or understanding that there just simply wasn't any signs of Kohaku or Sango there. He'll just have to deal with it, I guess. Aww. Good timing there, monk. Finally, he lets that true compassion of his show. I think as much as Inuyasha hides behind that tough, rugged exterior and biting remark, Miroku hides behind those “cursed” hands of his and the groping. It's nice to see him simply show his care and love for Sango without being stupid in the end. And Rin, so sweet and caring. She has such a large heart, it's no wonder it's melted the ice around Sesshomaru's. She just had to show her concern for both Sango and Kohaku. Aww and Sango's taking Miroku on a walk with her. Yay. Uh oh, a huge dinner party, on the night of the new moon, held by Totosai? Why do I get the feeling a certain Demon Lord is truly behind this? Shopping...that'll be fun. I can just see Inuyasha now. Especially when it comes time to be measured for his clothes. Poor Koga. He has no idea how much Sesshomaru outclasses him, does he? Suddenly appearing out of no where like that. That's classic. Nice, he even knows to use Inuyasha's name when Sesshomaru gets pissed. We know that Sesshomaru's a possessive guy. HE's the only one who can get away with insulting his baby brother. Anyone else better expect a huge ass kicking. Another soft scene between Miroku and Sango. I like how she was the one doing most of the initial touching and hugging. It shows real progress. Nice to see Kikyo talk to Kohaku about his feelings about seeing Sango. It's hard for him to understand, but I think she helped, at least a little. She knows, as I'm sure he does, that Naraku could come back any time and end it. They don't have to say it since it's the large elephant in the room. Oh dear. Looks like Kagome's gonna be getting Inuyasha all worked up again resting her head in his lap like that. She probably wanted that, anyways. Bad back! Bad! She was about to help Inuyasha out and it had to get in the way like that! Seems he thinks she oughta handle it right away even if she meant to rub his back instead. Silly Inuyasha. A two for one, eh? A massage AND sex together? That sounds fun and, and, and well hot. What a nice way to wake up...more sex. Yay. Uh oh. Kagome's upset. That's not good for a man's ego after sex. Glad she let him now it was happiness and not sadness! Made her very happy to know he could be a little more public with her than he has been in the past, all without even mentioning Kikyo once. And yes, good of him to tell her that he told Kikyo he'd not let her get away with hurting Kagome. I'll be anxious to see the dinner party and what happens when they get the rings. It should be interesting to see who shows up and what's going on. I can't wait to see adult Rin with Sesshomaru. I'm sure she's got to be beautiful, and a bit wiser than the last time they saw her! I look forward to the next chapter!