rate_review Reviews

oooh, I liked it, I loved the tension, I think this would be a very good story, not just one shot.

Aye, that was good <3

I liked it. A lot. I noticed some mistakes, but nothing particularly annoying. The overall reading-experience was very pleasant. ^-^

I haven't read the manga chapters yet, but from what you said the situation was similar to when the baby tried to control Kagome. He was digging for dark emotions in her heart, but eventually she recovered, saying these were normal feelings and not dark ones. You remember that episode?

Anyway, what I wanted to say was that I really liked this human Kagome. She's not perfect, but not being perfect doesn't necessarily mean someone is bad. Finding the balance between these two is part of growing up, and something Kagome at her age deals with. So this little bit of growing up, of learning who and what you are fit perfectly.

And the end was just hilarious. So Miroku. ^-^

Poor Miroku... he's going to get blue balls like that... anyway, nice work. *nod nod*

Hey, I really liked this story, hope you do more! Can't wait.

i like the changes...;)