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love it

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

it was devious,it kept me on the edge of my seat,and it was great!

u can have him get shot by the same type of arrow kykio shot inu-yasha in the beginning he will sleep eternaly and get's suck't in the tree of ages until kagome go's back to time and draw's him out of the tree's safe keeping removs the arrow he will live with kagome and have not aged a day becouse of the spell and they live happely ever after. OR u can exstend the story furter and have him go to the same school as kagome, and make a living hell ther with inu as kagomes lover and having all girls after him but he only want's HIS kaggy and have hobo trying to get her, only to have inu almost killing him in the prosess. inu can have kaggy make a spell to hide his doggy topp. just for the fun of it 8-)

Peace & Love BastardOmega

omg..that was a awesome chapter...I think you should post both sides...but thats just me...I wouldnt be able to decide either....but if you want a real answer then have it be inuyasha...unless inuyasha can go into the real world with her...

do both so both ways can be seen.

This is a very interesting story and so far, I do not feel that the characters are OOC. The history of the cannon would leave this to be a possibility. And, first loves never die. At least, that's my opinion. Given that, Inuyasha would choose to be with Kikyou. It is actually what I expect to happen, given the additional fact that Kagome does not belong in the Senguko Jidai. Excellent premise, balance of dialogue and narrative, and description.

The story is written well. However, you do need a beta. Most of us do. AFF has a beta group and you can find their link on the main group or on the site itself. I'll be watching for an update. I'm very interested in how Kagome reaches her decision and what that decision will be.

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