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UGH!!! Cliffies! Gotta hate them! I am so very happy that you have updated this story, and I can't wait to read the next one! The chapters ust seem to be getting better and better!

Until we meet again.

Okay ! Now I see where you're going (or I suppose...) Waouw ! What a plot !!!
Thanks !

A french reader,
Salut de la France,

Merely Truth

yea, cool. Just read all the chapters today, so...big review, heh. I am really enjoying this. However, I think you've scarred me for life. Everytime i watch an anime and Sesshoumaru looks at everyone with that bored expression I'm gonna be thinking of those hentai thoughts and laughing my ass off. People will think I've lost my mind, LOL. Shippou’s assumptions on how to court a girl…great! Even though he doesn't have a big part, I like how Miroku's been portrayed a lot, as well.

I look forward to the next chapter a lot, thank you so much for writing it!

I'll end with some of my favorite lines:

And if he didn’t ogle her…Bad Things Would Happen. She didn’t know what, exactly, but they Would Happen, nonetheless. - love the capital letters, you could just hear the emphasis.

“You will refrain from assaulting my person,” he said regally for a demon kneeling on a pink Hello Kitty blanket.

... he watched the clouds morph their shapes.

‘Two rabbits fucking.’ - I swear, I will never look at clouds the same again: LOL

Treed like a cat – great imagery. And the tag team assault by the brothers…great

“You have to give a little to get…a little,” Miroku explained with an inward cringe. ‘I’m a bad man. A very bad man.’ LOL, and he is, the hentai. Although Sesshoumaru is defnitely winning in hentai status this time around.
Lucky for us...woo is he hot, neh?

Holy shit! What the hell happened!? Explosions and...and snakes,
and, and, Kagome's in lala land! And Kikyou? What's up with that?
And an ever perverted dog. And the beetles! WhooWhee! *shakes head*
Gah! That's a great chapter girl. Mystery! Suspense! Action!
Perversion! You've got it all! However, I do feel a bit sad for
Sesshoumaru. His idea of courting a female is so different than
Kagome's that he is constantly confused, angry, and left...well...
hard up. LOL

I am so anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Snow

that last bit was a little confusing i'm sure the next chpater will clear it all up! great writing i loved the eating scene and then sess mistaking her "offer" LOL! keep it up!

That's so sad! He broke her ring! Now how is she going to find out what Sess is thinking?

Oh no! The ring is broken! That means no more naughty thoughts from our sexy taiyoukai damn it! By the way, that kiss was smoldering hot! On fire, I tell you! On fire! Great job.

I LOVE this story. I like it well enough to do something I NEVER do--write a review!! The characters behave exactly the way I would expect them to--a very rare thing in fan fics--and they STAY in character. I have to laugh! Inuyasha is a jerk, but a funny jerk. His bumbling inexperience cracks me up! His behavior seems very...Inuyasha. Kagome's character is also supereb. It is really difficult to find a Kagome in a fanfic that is truley Kagome. She seems to be a difficult character for most writers to capture accurately. Yet I feel that you have done an excellent job. And Sesshomaru... Good job! Consistancy, continuity, style...need I go on? But...more updates? Please? (insert sad puppy eyes here)

no way! now she has to get anothr one!!!! ahhh!!! InuYahsha is such an ass!!!! i love this fic! one of the best there is!

heheh this is funny. im loving it. upadte soon.