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for Cereal Box Romance

by RhiannonoftheMoon

person Dyquem
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can see Inuyasha as a male slut, but it is disappointing that Sesshoumaru still thinks of her as "the one that got away" so strongly that he would find it interesting and fun to deflower her in front of Inuyasha; I guess it is true. Many men don't grow up no matter what their age :-)
person MetsukiKaraTen
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing! You've so got me on the edge of my seat!! Congrats on the nominations, well deserved... if you are still doing the update emails please include me, I am anxiously awaiting future chapters! dropbox13@hotmail.com
Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent with us all!!
person DarkMystic
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, commenting in the case of Duck and run... "Oh my god, sess is a panty pincher!" That is all... *reads on*
person DarkMystic
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lmao "Wtf is a date?" >.< Priceless.
person DarkMystic
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg nuuu cliffy! >.< And I cant believe she said "the carpet matches the drapes" that was freaking priceless, omg I laughed so much while reading this. Please write me when you update. my email is DemonMina@yahoo.com Please please write me. I'm too adicted to this story to forget about it and let it go. Thanks.
person Airy
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated. Keep up the good work. Funny carpet matches the drapes scene.(lol).
person Angie
schedule October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No, This is killing me, what hit her?.. some bug like thing??? ahh!!!! the suspence is killin me, and what happened to sessh/kag thing??? tear, the plot keeps getting better, but then i just keep wondering what is going to happen next!... curses!...

Please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


PLEASE!!
person Badgrl74
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cliffie! They followed her to the future! I bet Kikyou has something to do with it. Love your story! See ya next chappie!
person LdyMoon
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my fav: he had stripes on his you know what!! That is so halirious though I probably would have been killed because I would have just laughed and that's if my curiousity before I started to laugh didn't make my situation worse for having to touch the stripes. Good chapter and looking forward to seeing what in the world Kikyo was even talking about does she ever make sense since she became the walking clay pot???
person Faerie Demoness
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.o Starting to sound like a movie...I like it. Hehehe...a caress and squeeze of the leg usually does mean "lets go have sex" That was so funny...I can just see it happening. Oh I defintely can't wait to see what happens next!

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness