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for Cereal Box Romance

by RhiannonoftheMoon

person Flightoffancy
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There is no lagging with this story. You just keep the sexual tension going forward and it has got me holding my breath. He is so raunchy in this and I love it. I can't believe he took her panties, that is just too much. His confusion over her antics is perfect, especially when he found her in the field and she had already worked herself into a rage. I identified with it, I've done it, it was superb.

I LMAO at Inuyasha, "maybe Kagome will dress up like a miko?" He really has himself in a bind and coming up with the most atrocious solutions. His blue balls will be ended, He'll be killed if he even mentions any of these.

THis is a great story and I cannot wait for more. Til next time, Deb. pegasus4@bellsouth.net
person 123
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“You’re in my house,” haha that whole scene was sooo funny! ahh i thought they were going to jump each other! ahh soo close!! keep it up!
person wynter89
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
getting better and more fasinating the more i read it... wow... i am really into reading this.
I love it!!!

good luck
i hope you update soon
person Faerie Demoness
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!! I had a smile on my face the whole time I read this chapter! This is so good! I was laughing by the end. Man oh man...I love the whole "miko torturing technique". I was having a ratty day until I read this. Man, I feel giddy now. Thank you for such great entertainment! Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter. I love it!

Ja na!
person Byako
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Inuyasha, eeeeew. Practicing with Kaede's pots? I'm not sure I want to know how that works or what he was doing with the sourcream and onion dip^^; Investigation, indeed! Those poor panties are in for some serious wanking, I'm sure. And he's rather full of himself, isn't he? Just 'cause she got a little wet in them it means she was thinking about him, huh? I absolutely love Sesshoumaru's thoughts, and the contrast between what he thinks and says is great. I so love you for it... most other authors would make him pervy through and through, and soooo out of character. You do such a lovely job with this story! I must admit though, I too am very curious what will become of the blank decoder ring. I suspect it will somehow end up in the hands of our favorite pervatized youkai, and I wonder how he'll use it. *snickers*
person Inu_Twins
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Another wonderful chapter!!! Plz Update ASAP!!!
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* Kagome doesn't know what to do with Sesshomaru. This is too cute. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update as soon as you can, Please. :)
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SESSHOMARU IS A PANTY THEIF!!!!! *giggles like mad* lol I loved theis chapter with all my heart... update soon.
person ChaoticReverie
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy Jesus, that was hot. Sesshomaru is most definitely a naughty ol' dog in this fic. I love the sexual tension and I'm eagerly awaiting the lemon. I pray it comes soon, otherwise I'll go nuts. Wonderful diction, by the way, and I adore your writing technique. It's humorous, but not to a ridiculous degree. Continue, please.
person dendy
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol Who knew Sesshoumaru could be such a dirty pervert? Stealing a girl's used panties. Tsk, tsk. Yet so hot when he does it. If it was anyone else I'd pound him but Sesshoumaru... *drool* I guess being a pretty dog... demon, lets you get away with a lot of things. ^.~ When he's alone he can sniff it some more. Hehe, and Inuyasha's "pup tent"? LOL!!!!!!! Ouch, not very flattering. Not even a full fledged tent eh? I'm really curious as to what will happen to that Human Decoder Ring. I have a weird feeling that it'll show it later on. Love the story, keep it up! XD