AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Cereal Box Romance

by RhiannonoftheMoon

person jen
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome! I can't wait to see what comes next. This twisted bet is going to be so much fun - let the fun last a little longer before they 'come to respect one another' or whatever.
person AIdeen
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter!!! Please up-date again!!! I have to know what happens next!!!! She and Sess have to get together!!!!! Please up-date soon!!!!
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cocky SOB's, aren't they? What happens next? Please update soon! I can hardly wait to find out how Sesshomaru finds out what a date is, and than how he goes about "wooing" her.
person Kryssala
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I laugh so hard every time I read this. Good job, I'm happy to hear you got nominated for those awards.
person Faerie Demoness
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~claps hands~ Yea! Another great chapter. I have to ask though, what happened to the other ring that was lost? Who is hearing the thoughts from that ring? I look forward to the next chapter, this was great!

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness
person Snowfall
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was so fucking funny...until that asshole said 'bastard child'. He has no honorable intentions whatsoever. Bastard! His little play with mokomoko-sama was hot and his little game on the blanket was surprising. And damn, he's hot. I still wouldn't have him though. He is a pervert. Ooooh, I'm so mad at him. You just have me so...so angry at him! I hope Kagome beats the crap out of him or at the very least knocks his ego down a peg or two. Yeah, that would be better than a fist to the solar plexus (sp?). Yeah, Kagome, insult his manhood! Or his ability to please a woman. LOL Now that would be funny and leave a very pissed off Sesshoumaru. At least Inuyasha has an idea of what she likes, if only he can tame his wild side long enough to make some progress. I hope that she heard what he said. I'm cussing like a sailor inside my head right now.

Good job! I'm anxious to see the next chapter.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person Vanessa
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good plot and love the characters. Please continue soon.
person Kryssala
schedule August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, really keep going with this. It just keeps getting funnier.
person Snowfall
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! I didn't know that you had written more! Well, Akago is clearly a bitch and we need to do something about her. She could totally fuck things up! The least that needs to be done is for Sango to bitch slap her. Getting rid of her altogether would be great.

O...M...G. The Ring! The Ring! Shit! Kagome's going to pay for that little accident. And I bet I know who gets there perfect, razor sharp claws on it. Oh yeah! (Please don't tell me that it is Akago; I'll have to kick your ass) Heheh, Sesshoumaru doesn't understand humans at all. Poor Kagome. She doesn't understand youkai any better. Awesome distraction for the rest of the group and the fact that Sesshoumaru flat out refused to give his reasons for hiring Sango were so in character. "No." Simple, to the point, and I so love Sesshoumaru! Miroku...LOL...such a pervert and I'm sure that Kagome, as innocent as she is, got really grossed out. But I love the guy for it. I bet he makes a really great lover. No disrespect for him out of This Snowfall. Heheh. Sorry, if my review is a bit childish, but I'm too tired to do anything serious.

Great two chapters and I hope that I don't miss it when you put up the next one. I can't believe that I missed these!

Snowfall
person Badgrl74
schedule August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that made me hot!