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for Cereal Box Romance

by RhiannonoftheMoon

person ldymoonluvsinuyasha (nsi)
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, too lazy to re-sign in, I hate the fact that it knocks you out when your reading a story, who wants to speed read through a great chapter like this? I mean really. I love the cliff hanger. I believe in cliff hangers like another religion. It demands the reader to return just to find out. And being that it's Friday it's a good cliff hanger day. I wonder if Inuyasha is around somewhere looking for her to then find her kissing Sesshomaru. However, I would like to see Inuyasha actually get a shot at her too because I think when she finally chooses Sesshy-kun and his magical Mokomoko-sama he needs to feel the rejection. And that's weird coming from me being that I adore my puppy eard halfbreed. Looking forward to the next chapter have a great week kay!

ldymoon
person Faerie Demoness
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*bangs head against the couch pillow* DAMMIT DAMMIT DAMMIT!!!! That was soooooo evil of you! I was so happy with the way it was going, then you do this to me? *sobs* You are so mean! Seriously though, good chappie. I loved it, and so long too. Woo hoo! I like them long like that. You are so awesome. Keep up the good work!

~Much Love~

Faerie Demoness
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person iceraqs
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
evil author!!!! grrr... anyway, it's nice that you updated already! YAY! and this story started out to be boring for me, but then...it went practically too nice not to miss! haha. please keep on updating! ;o)
person Badgrl74
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's interesting seeing Sesshy as such a playa! Too bad they don't touch on this in the series. Great cliffie!
person bettychan
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a delightful story. Don't suppose you could update tomorrow, could you? I can't wait to see what happens next.
person Bridget
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story so far! I have read quadragle and loved it. So I decided to check out your other stories. I can't wait to see what happens! Please update soon!
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol absolutely loved the new chapter!!! can't wait to read the next one so get a move on already and update soon!
person Skimbleshanks
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Speed update.
Enough said.

And congratulations on your awards! You deserve them with your writing skills!

Luv Skimbleshanks!
xxxMeowxxx
person LdyMoon
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story, and nobody's ever made Sesshomaru's mokomoko thing so sexy before, kudos to you.

update soon

ldymoon