rate_review Reviews

you said you finished it? is his oging to be the only chapter

I just wanted to write you and say that this was a very wonderfully written story. I felt so much through it, and the sex scene was absolutely amazing. I do so hope you decide to write a sequel to this.

Great job!!! The lemon was well written and the story very believable. Couldn't help but feel sad for Inuyasha though - I'm sure that was the intent ^^ Anyway, loved it!

No, you didn't miss the mark, in fact you nialed it. For a one shot, that was probably one of the best that I have read with this pairing. I'm glad that you didn't make Sesshoumaru all OCC like people usaly try to do when confronted with writing for thsi pairing and I think that yo did an exelent job worthy of praise.

Well shoot, you did alright to me.

For a first time lemon you did a wonderful job. I did feel sorry for Inuyasha though, Sesshomaru didn't have to be that rough. It would be really interesting to see what motivated Sesshomaru into marking Inuyasha in the first place and why he keeps coming back, since he supposedly hates Inuyasha. I hope to be seeing more of your work sometime soon. ^_^

Waow ! Very hot ! And hard for Inuyasha ! Isn't there a hope for him in the last sentences ? I find you wrote a good lemon, it was a little special and yet, I wait something new between the two brothers, an increasing respect from Sesshoumaru, perhaps love in the end ? Don't you plan to follow this story ? I very well see the Call from Sesshoumaru point of view, to discover why he is doing the call and why he keeps his brothers on his lap...
In all case, continue !
Bye,

Merely Truth