rate_review Reviews

I'm not sure I'd say the writing in it is crapy. I think the problem with it is that it's way too dark, angsty, and incredibly depressing with no light at the end of the tunnel. Honestly if Kag's is feeling this horrible it would only make sense that she would try to kill herself at one point. There just doesn't seem to be enough happiness to counter ballance the darkness in the story - especially with the last two chapters.

Now don't get me wrong I do like this story, especially the first 3 chapters, but if you want people to respond to this story your next chapters are going to have to have more love and positive emotions in them in order for the story not to get bogged down with overwhelming depression and no end in sight.

I'd also like to mention that I do like a good angst driven story but in order for it to work there has to be some light at the end of the tunnel, otherwhise it's just a depressing sadistic story and who wants to read that for fun...that's what world news is for.

I loved it, when it comes to sesshomaru you are by far the best with his attitude. Overrall I loved it hope you write more soon