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O.M.G! This story is rrreeeeeeeeaaallllyyy good! Please continue(sp?!) it very soon it's so good and I can't help but want to know what happens next...So update soon!

*LunaKageTenshi*
"Tears that fall are merlly reminders of what we are..humans and that the feelings within are real."
By...me
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well i hope this story has a happy ending and yours does too. There's a reason i don't like tragedy. Good story and I look forward to more when you get the chance.

Hey~
I absolutly ~love~ your fic!! I wish tat you would update soon so that we could see what happens to Kagome and Sesshomaru/Lord Fluffy ^^ I love your style of writting and I hope to read more of your fics~ I best be going now though... If you wanna reach me try inuyasha_1234@hotmail.com

Your story has such emotion to it. I love it. The story line is just so amazing. I think this has to be one of the best sessh/kag stories I have read that had this sort of plot line[betrayal, and then the truth and stuff]. I can't wait to read what comes next.

Wow. I enjoy this story very much. I normally do not read stories with this much angst in them, but something about this story has kept me coming back. If you still need a beta I would be honored. Please keep writing. I am looking forward to finding out how this story will end.

Aww, man, I really love this story!!!! How long until you update??? I just love it! I'm up at 7 am, so that tells you it's really good, my limit is 6! *winks* Please update soon! I love every part of this, but it makes me wonder, who raped Kagome? Darn you and your complicated plot!!! Hehe!

i love your story keep up the awsome writting

WOW!! The song was awesome! and I can't wait to find out what really happened between inu and kagz

I'm so happy that my review made such a positive impression on you! As a fellow writer I really try to include as much constructive criticism and possible solutions as I can in my reviews and it's nice to know that people actually appreciate what I have to say. And I agree with the other reviewer you mentioned that Sesshoumaru really does need to start having a more dominant personality in the story, without straying from your originial interpretation of him in the previous chapters - which I think you've done an awesome job in the last chapter, you just need to keep it going by making him show kag's that he's sticking around for an indefinite period of time, so that she can become more secure in her feelings for him.

This last chapter was great by the way! Every scene was fantastic! Sesshoumaru's conduct and need to love and protect her was awesome. Even Kag's offering herself to Inuyasha was a great angsty twist - definitely made my stomach twist in disgust even at the same time that I knew it was beliveable response on her part. I like the way you're showing kag's emotional and mental healing in this story, it's very believable with just the right amount of confidence, self-deprecation, low self-esteem, and overal mental anguish that she learning to wade through in her quest to come to terms with everything that's been going on in her life. I look forward to your next update.

THis is beautiful.Keep up the awesome work.Please write again soon.