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for A Dance To Remember

by alakeshadow

person sandy
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi i like your story very much..but you made a little error,,,,....at the beginning kagomes mother says a few times that kagome is her only daughter, and because of that shes very cautious choosing a husband,,,,...and then suddenly there`s kikyou......you should fix that
person Arachnae
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Seems like a wonderful story thus so far! Keep up the excellent work!!
person aurora
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
dud the second chap was great i liked it a lot keep up the good work and email me so that i will now when you up date dud i really like this story i am thinking that is better than (destined for me) which is great to.
person wynter89
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow intense relationship there... It is an interesting situation for them to be in, i cant wait to read more.
good luck
i hope you update soon
person fluffykags
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is one of the best that I have read so far about an unwanted marriage between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. One of the places in this chapter that attracted me the most was the fact that there were some descriptive scenes, but not so much that it was overwhelming. Loved this first chapter, so I hope you will update soon!
person cancan227
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whats going to happen next???
person Cochrann
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful start! This holds a lot of promise for a great story. I look forward to reading more!
person aurora
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this is fantastic great i love it up date soon and the nature of kagome and sesshomaru is great keep up the good work.
person Yuta
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was very fortunate to be able to read such an enchanting story. I really do love it so far, I do hope you continue with your chapters and kkep updating as soon as humanly possible. I wish I would have been able to read the lemon. But sadly, you only have one chapter. All though that is all right, I will keep checking and waiting to see when you update once more. I will be looking forward to the next chapter I assure you.