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for A Dance To Remember

by alakeshadow

person Laini
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it,very well written.Update soon,can't wait to find out what happens next! ^_^
person meg
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it! really hope she wins, i hate when he feels all superior
person ama
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome keep up the rockin' work. I'll miss you.
person Semme
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You said in the first chapter she was the only child...then she suddenly had a sister.
person Semme
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nevermind... You knew. Anyhow... he didn't rape her, he just dragged her into a stall thing, tied her up and made her horny and didn't comply with her wishes to fuck like animal's. That my friend is not rape, it is kinky and mean.
person BlackFire
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its a good story, but you should make kagome win more or fight back more it makes her look weak. or you should make her plot something.dont get me wrong i like the story and you should write more
person Kamui
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm already dying to read the next chapter. Save me? ;]
person Slightly_Sinful
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Darling plz dont keep me in suspence now......you must update I'm loving this story
(P.S dont you worry Id love to spank ooops sry slap...no maybe i should say hit yes hit Sesshomaru too)LOL
person kamui
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are truly skilled. i hope to see more of your writings.
person Linka
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHH! Freaking HOT!! MORE MORE MORE!