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for A Dance To Remember

by alakeshadow

person Ana
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This whole we are not equal because you are female thingy with Sesshoumaru really makes me wanna strangle him. Other than that this was a great story. I can't wait till Kagome teaches him a thing or two. UPDATE SOON!
person AIdeen
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, but Kagome isn't the best herself. Shess could be alittle nicer, however Kagome is no pinic her self. She needs to be taimed herself!
person RED DAY
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I so enjoy this fic, it's fantastic!! Please update as soon as you can because I soooo enjoy it!!
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
haha i just want to point out that onna means woman, and miko means priestess.
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and haveing eighteen moons means shes 18 months old... kinda young doontcha think?
person Jax
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your story! its perfect! the dripping possesion is beautiful! keep up the good work and update soon!
person Ashley
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it keep it coming last chapter was hilarious!
person Shadow
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just LOVE IT!!!!!!!(more than three exclaimation point means serious) I have an idea you can put into it. If you plan to soften their love at all, you could have Sesshy in a fight and allow Kagome to show up and save him, BUT she gets hurt in the process, ergo sadness for Fluffy! Hehe! I just love your evil mind! I think you and I could make a great team!!! *rubs hands together maniacally* PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

Your new fan,
Shadow
person neko_maya
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol i can't wait until your next chapter your very good at writing and i hope the next chappie is as good as the rest ^ ^
~Maya... the ninja~
person Sankontesou
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooo...this is really good!!!

update again soon!!!