rate_review Reviews

Oh My Goodness. I just love this story, the whole. “You bow down to my whims” I love it. Sesshoumaru can be such an ass, and I am glad Kagome won the argument in chapter 5. I like how you drawing out the relationship, most writers (Like me) make the couple like each other in like the first few chapters. I like that about your story, where they constantly fight they have “moments” occasionally.

You are very talented as a writer. I simple enjoyed your lemons. Wow! I laughed really, really hard when I was reading the part where Sesshoumaru and Kagome’s mother were fight. I just couldn’t stop getting a small woman yelling at Sesshoumaru who is taller and Sesshoumaru giving in and saying sorry.

The fact that Kagome is sticking up for herself and not giving into all of his demands and fighting him is funny. Also I love the fact that you are keeping them in character. I hate stories where you expect someone to be in character and they end up being the complete opposite. It just turns me off.

Don’t get me wrong I love ooc characters. But, there is a breaking point in that line when you have Sesshoumaru saying “Does this pink shirt make me look fat hunni” I mean SERIOUSLY. Someone actually wrote that in one of their stories.

I was like yeah ok first off Sesshoumaru doesn’t wear pink and second he isn’t fat. So, I completely left the story and haven’t read it since. Not that it wasn’t a good one, but I just…

Anyways, this was a great read, I can’t wait until you update again. I like the plot and the way the story is coordinated so far. Please update soon I can’t wait. :)

yo, awesome story, loving it and can u say Hilarious? YA

good job

kagome kicked some ass! oh yes! i love this chapter 6. i thought, it had become boring, but then i was wrong! hahaha. can't imagine, it's sesshoumaru asking for divorce. now's some laughing matter to me. hahaha. keep up! hope to read the next chapter! *giggles* i'm gonna read the two chapters over and over again! huurah!!!

Again very well written. I can’t wait to see what happens next. I hope you update soon.
And I hope Sesshoumaru doesn’t stay a bastard for ever

oh my god that was so awesome i cant wait till the next chapter.

Wow! Love the ending!! Well the whole thing!
You are twisted? o.O;; But twisted is guud! >D More passion that way. XD

Please do continue writing please!
Will you e-mail me if you update? PLEASE!!! TT.TT

Take care!
~dt

luv your story. very, extremely, alot of fun to read!!!

when are you going to add another chapter? i was hoping you had already added one. i love this story a lot...

*pauses in mock contemplation* He's right. She is a woman. It will be hard to be equal. *pauses then grins* Maybe if he's nice, she'll slow down and let him catch up.