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for A Dance To Remember

by alakeshadow

person sallysour
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely loved it!!! they finally made up yeah!!! i'll admit i was getting frustrated about it for a little while but the ending was such a relief!!! on e of my top five favorite stories ever!!
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! what a chapter you wrote! The character roles just keep getting better and better by the chapter! I loved how kagome showed him who was boss at first than Sesshomaru got her back! Very nice work!!
schedule February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello. I have just read the first 8 chapters of your story and wanted to tell you how well I think you are doing. It is very moving. The two of them are so stubborn and full of anger! The last fight that they had gave me the shivers. They nearly killed one another. I can't blame Kagome. I would have purified his ass too. Maybe he will think twice next time he wants to bite down on her carotid artery. The jerk. Hopefully Rin will bring a peace treaty between the two of them before one of them succeeds in doing the other in. Oh, and the word 'staid' means 'sedate'. 'To stay' is spelled 'stayed'. I know that you are having some issues with your beta's. I don't mean to offend you. I just thought that you would like to know in order to avoid the misspelling in the future. The story is great and I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks for the read!

~Rin
person ILuvFLUFFYmarshmellows
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i remember reading this story a loong time ago!
and its been forever since you updated!
you need to!
*shakes finger at you*
i really like this story
its very interesting
and different
i like the love/hate relationship the two have
person Trinh
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I LOVE IT! please update soon! and e-mail me at thuytrinhhoang@aol.com when you do please?! i'd love to continue reading it!! :D
person star101
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is very interesting. I've enjoyed it so far and I will like to know when you update.
person ohhdanni
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story so far, its written so well. keep it up = ) i recognised that part from a book too, although i cant remember the name either lol but it worked perfectly in this story. love it!
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i donr t get it wgat changed? this is the same chapter please send a reply
person kagomesirene
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh was so happy until i realised you edited and did not update... -_- well....i really hope you update soon....i really want to know what`s going to happen next
person cilla
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like this so far. i dont review much only when i like the story so so far so good also i tend to repeat my self HAHA^_^