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for The Strongest, My Only

by alakeshadow

person madmiko
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More? More? Please, please, please? I really like your take on a Sess/Kag pairing. Of course, you've even included an interesting Inu/Kag relationship that I like as well. hope you get a chance to write more of this soon!
person madmiko
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Impressive! I first read this last week, and just had to read it again. I think you have this paced just right. Love the plot and the way you are advancing it. I'm also really liking the way you are nurturing the Inu/Kagome relationship. I can't wait to see what happens next -- more, please!!
person Snowfall
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was really good, very tantalizing. I know what you mean about writing lemons. I was blushing through the first few and had no idea if I was doing a good job. Yes, you did well. Thanks for the great spelling and grammar.

Snow
person Snowfall
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very intriguing story. I like how you portray all of the characters. What I don't understand is how Inuyasha seems to have two different personalities. Kind and gentle one minute and a major prick the next. Sesshoumaru is such a god! You've done a great job with him and Kagome. I love that old sorceress too. Hehe; tormenting Sesshoumaru. I hope that you keep her around for awhile.

Keh! It's late and my mind isn't working. I love the fic!

Snow
person AIdeen
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aren't they suppose to get together? I liked the chapter!! Please up-date soon!
person Anon
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my gawwwd u sooooooo rule please update sooon i love it!!
person Twilight Garden
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a really good chapter. I wish someone would shut Inuyasha up for a while. He can get a little annoying at times. What happened to Sesshoumaru?
person 123
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooo and the plot thickins! i wonder where sesshomaru went!
person Ceridwyn
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Totally awesome, as usual. Please don't stop writing. Keep it up whenever possible. But don't wear yourself out! I like what you've done with Kagome...cool.
person Aaliyah Starnight
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it totally