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for The Strongest, My Only

by alakeshadow

schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Good chapter! Please update soon!
person Steffuls
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really need to update your story.
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY I happy you updated and Im so happy your in love. Its great aint it...
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOoooooo.....this is VERY VERY interesting.

Please continue.

It has an excellent story line.

Wow.
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
goshes...this story is just so breath-taking (esp. the dream ) *wink*...this is really so cool
really2x hope you can find time to update soon.
person swtdrm01
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Thank you for updating and I hope to see the next chapter soon.
person ILuvFLUFFYmarshmellows
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! i really like this fic! its so cute! and i wonder how kagome is goin to handle this new power? well cant wait til u update!
person h to the iso
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story so good! i hope it continues :)
person Fred
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! I look forward to seeing how it continues. Just a note...Miroku's staff is not a 'crosier'. A crosier is "cro·sier or cro·zier - n. - 1. A staff with a crook or cross at the end, carried by or before an abbot, bishop, or archbishop as a symbol of office." The correct term for what Miroku carries is 'Shakoju', which is the correct term for the kind of staff that is carried by Japanese monks.
person Flightoffancy
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a very impressive story. At first it was very, very hot (exquisite lemon by the way) and then it got very dark. Every time Kagome got stabbed I squirmed. But then you got down to Sess's and Kagome's dilemma with the sorceress and I was laughing my ass off. When he kept trying to snap her with his whip I was rolling. It is very hard and dangerous to get someone so mean to do what you want them to.

I like your style as with your other "Angels come from Paper and Ink" , I really like that one too. I like the way you have paired them up and using dreams to feed our hentai fever but stringing them along in the story. When Kagome "accidently" strung Inuyasha up and then made Sesshomaru disappear was hilarious. I can't wait to see what happens next.

If it is possible to let me know when you update, I am at pegasus4@bellsouth.net.

TIl next time, Deb