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for Divine Concubine

by CiraArana

person serpentsophie
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i think the story is pretty good. Keep up the good work.
But i would like some actions soon with kagome it is a bit boring to read.
Maybe let her captor have at least one go with her, or let sessumaru save her at the last moment but please do something !!!
person wynter89
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always i love what you write... this is the most interesting, suspensful fic i have read...
i wonder if or when Sesshomaru is coming into this... i hope soon...

good luck
i hope you update soon
person esther
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great...loved it. im a lil confused about miroku.....hes sooooo cold-hearted! poor sango. when is sess goin to come again??? i realli want to see sees and kagome go together in the end! i wish i could right like you.....i tried to...realli tried to. but i onli have the idea of wat i was goin to write but not the detail or anithin....plz update and grace ur fans w/ a new chapter! =]

~eS~
person Flightoffancy
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was great!!! Husband, huh? I think there will be a few males protesting this. I like the way they were kidnapped, that was cool. If anybody is in danger of falling for this guy it is definitely Sango who has a torn heart.

Does your mother read any of your stuff? My girls and son were responsible for getting me started on anime two years ago. I am now 51 and you are one of my favorite authors. I do read other anime stories but Sess/Kag is my favorite. And you do it so well. Your lemons are sublime.

I am very upset at Miroku. Has he lost all sensitivity? This is just not like him. I just want to put his wind tunnel on his crotch and then he won't have anything to worry about anymore.

Til next time, Deb.
person catseye
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is getting more interresting. It seems like Kagome is the Divine Concubine and the rest of the uniques are lesser concubines. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.
Nein die Prüfungen fangen diese Woche an. Dafür habe ich aber auch in 3 wochen Ferien bis zum nächsten Semester!!! Dann kann ich auch mehr Fanfics genießen.
person dribbledrabble
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I beg to differ. (Referring to your statement: "I am not a nice author") You are a lovely author who fulfills my wants of having a well-written, juicy sess/kag story to read. Besides, if niceness is not a norm in the actual storyline, why should it be a part of your writing? *wink* *wink* I do ask, though, that you update as hastily as possible.
person dribbledrabble
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You, wonderful authoress, have reduced me to begging on my knees for another chapter of your story. Please! Hear my plea!
person LADYDOGDEMON
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR WRITING ... OUR YOU A REAL AUTHER BECOUSE YOU COULD EASLY WRITE A NOVAL.
person Flightoffancy
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was really surprised to see a sequel to "Dragon's Prey". I am also really glad. I just couldn't see Sesshomaru letting go of a good thing. He is the Lord of the West and hardly stupid.

Poor Inuyasha. It truly is not his fault that he is still so immature, but he does hold his promises dear and the first one was to Kikyo. I am not fond of Kikiyo as a character but she does serve a purpose. We may be frustrated with Inuyasha's inability to help Kagome but things happen for a reason and I truly believe that Kagome and Inuyasha were meant to be only very good and trusted friends.

Inuyasha will see this as well as he grows but he is hurting so much that I feel for him.

Miroku, on the other hand, is mature enough to see that he has led Sango to believe he cares for her and has delibertly blown her off for a pretty face. I would hope that in later chapters he comes to his senses. He was so tender when he "helped" Sango. Was that all he wanted from her? I thought that this would bring them closer.

THis divine thing is a unique twist. Only talented girls and they just disappear, almost like they want to go if no alarm is raised and no fight is put up, well except for Bara. I can't wait to see where this takes us.

I don't care when Sesshomaru shows up, just so he does. You said he will eventually and I trust you implicitly.
As for the disclaimer at the beginning of Dragon's Prey; I recall distinctly that you said it would start out Inu/Kag and end up Sess/Kag, so there.

If it is possible could you notify me of updates? My email is pegasus4@bellsouth.net

I look forward to next time, Deb.
person catseye
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
es macht spaß, deine geschichten zu lesen. vor allem so kurz vor den prüfungen. sie versußen mir etwas die kl. pausen.
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