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for Divine Concubine

by CiraArana

person Shanalir
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooooh! I love this new chapter! Who would have guessed that Miroku had a reason- and an unselfish one at that- for womanising! I can't wait to see what happens to Kagome, though. I've said it before, and I'll say it again, you've got me hooked with this story!
person Aaliyah Starnight
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it
person sweetkijo
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter!!So..I wonder how this is all going to tie together. Inuyasha is still gealous over Kags and Sesshomaru is nowhere around...Kags is...god knows where! You have gotten yourself quite the story going here. Lol! I love it, keep up the great work. You never dissapoint!
person DocBevCulver
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7

Awesome story soo far. I've enjoyed reading what you have posted so far and can't wait to see how the next chapter unfolds. Bravo! As always!!!
person Aaliyah Starnight
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
where is Sesshomaru in this fic i thought it was a sesshomaru and kagome fic and i do not the Sesshomaru.
person Shanalir
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooooooh, I can't wait to see what happens when she finally manages to tell Shujin that she doesn't want him. if she manages to say anything to him at all, that is. And I can't wait to see what happens when/if Miroku makes it to the palace and finds all of those women there. And I'm really looking forward to Sesshoumaru's appearance in the story and his reaction to all of this. I really can't wait untill the next chapter, I'm gonna be on the edge of my seat untill this whole series is done! you really are an incredible author!
person Aideen
schedule September 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! Please up-date soon!!! I must know what happens next!!!!
person Kai
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm so glad that you decided to add another chapter to your story. I keep falling in love with it all over again. Unless that makes me seem like a lonely person...Oh no! Oh well. Just keep on writing! Love it!
person esther
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz review! im am sooo curious to kno wat s Shujin-sama like...

hurry!!
person Flightoffancy
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Boy, this guy must have some pickup line. They are perfectly fine sharing the most wonderful man they have ever met? I think there was something in the soup. I don't know though, he does sound kind of yummy. Maybe they can do some heavy petting (or more) before Sesshomaru comes to rescue her. Why waste an opportunity? ANd a see-through kimono, maybe she can take it with her when she leaves, it might come in handy.

This is a great story and I can't wait til next time, Deb at pegasus4@bellsouth.net