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for Divine Concubine

by CiraArana

person Shanalir
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was a really great twist! I really enjoy this new chapter. Hope your muse comes back soon!
person DocBevCulver
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I've enjoy reading each and every chapter and I loved what you have done with the latest (Ch. 8). I can't wait to see how the next unfolds and hopefully your fickle muse will become excited once again. :D Bravo!!! Can't wait to read more!
person Dawna Sama
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I like how this ls leading, please write more, I cant wait to see what will happen and if he will get her out.

Dawna Sama
person Airy
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad Sesshoumaru is now in the picture, I can tell something good is about to happen. Please cotinue updating, hope to read chapter 9 soon.
person Convict_Panthress
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woman, I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is like the best chapter ever...besides the damn thinks he's all that and a bag of chips god feeling up on her...putting Sesshomaru in that room is like the best thing since fanfictions! WOOT! Yeah buddy! Now you must continue! I have been waiting on this chapter for what felt like forever. But I understand if you have other things that are priority. But please I fraking beg you, from fellow author to fellow author: WRITE MORE, DAMNIT!!!!!!!!!! Anyway, this chapter is like Bow Chica Bow Wow!
Love, Peace and Chicken Grease!
Convict_Panthress
P.S--by the way, if you ever get a chance and if you like Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children please read my story ABSOLUTION and an Inuyasha/FFVII:AC So Cold. Thanks ^.^;;
person iamsouledge
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was really brave of Miroku. In theory, at least. We guys always seem to do the wrong things. =/ Good chapter regardless.
person kawaii-miko
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i no im winging but i want to no what happens to kag pwease(puppydogeyes)please
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Flightoffancy
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THis was a very action-packed exciting chapter. Miroku is very sneaky and I am glad he got to Sango first. I don't think they would have gotten anything solved with anyone else around. Men can be so stupid sometimes. Betrayal is ten times worse than death but you restored my faith in him.

Your story just keeps on picking up speed. I can't wait til Sesshomaru enters the picture and he better hurry. I don't think that God is going to waste any time convincing Kagome to stay since Sango escaped.

Great job, til next time, Deb. pegasus4@bellsouth.net
person I didn't do it
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sesshomaru is gonna be the one to save her right? the next chapter right? and you're going o update soon right? left? middle? Kagome needs Sesshy-sama!
person kawaii-miko
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN TO KAG I DONT GET WHAT THE DRAGON THING IS REALY CAN KAG BE SAVED BEFOR YOU NO UPDATE REALLY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!