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for Divine Concubine

by CiraArana

person lark
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story, as was the one that came before it. I like the idea of spreading out the relationship, instead of jumping straight into the instant realization/commitment/happily-ever-after that is occasionaly the norm. Its a nice change of pace. I completely understand the problem combination of a fickle muse, multiple commitments, and exhaustion that comes from school and life and never ceases to plague the terminally creative:) So all I have to say is go where the muse takes you and when you come back to this journey, I know I'll definately be along for the ride ;)
person Drianax
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but pensive ending. When will you begin the third installment (you WILL have a third installment in this series, won't you)? Please say yes. please, please, please! One question I have, is did Sess mark Kag as his mate at the end of Dragon's Prey (or are you going with something that is different than the ever popular Sess bites Kag, she's marked as his for all eternity? I love your fics and I hope you will update soon.

By the Way, when will you be updating "The Diary"?
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for finishing this story. I must say I was very shocked with the end. Am I correct to assume that Sesshomaru won't realize what Kagome means to him until Death’s Priestess? Is that going to be an angst ridden story? Does Sesshomaru realize that he loves Kagome & he has something to protect as Kagome dies in his arms?! I know you won't probably say anything about the plot, but please do tell if it will be an angst story. If you are taking votes as to making it angsty, I cast a vote against it.
Any who, I think you are great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Not that I mean to nag, but you said you were going to do a sequel for Passion & I wanted to know how that was going. Yes, I am a dying hard fan of yours. Yes, I have read all of your work posted here. No, I am not a stalker. I am a psychology major with a decent GPA.
person swasdiva
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet LORD!!! This fic is continued!!! I needed a cigarette after that chapter, screw that, a big fat cigar. A nice, big...fat...demon cigar...

Oh! uh...right! As always, your work is perfection!
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
;.; :crys tears of joy: OMFG THAT WAS SUCH A GOOD UPDATE!! I AM SO GLAD YOU DID NOT FORGET THIS FANFIC
PLEASE..PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON BEST LEMON EVER
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your work for about a month now, I simply must admit you are one of my favorite fanfic authors. Your stories are so well thought out and written, you're amazing! I had to create an account and say this, though I usually don't review, only read >< Thank you so much for the amazing stories, I hope your muse comes to you with more :) (Oh, I also hope it compels you to finish Divine Concubine (and the other 2 fanfics you've planned!), as I'm sooooo looking forward to reading what happens next!) Anyway, sorry for the long review, and thank you very much for the amazing fanfics you've written!
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! A NEW CHAPTER!!! YAY!!! Great by the way. ^_^
schedule June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh! I can't believe I missed this update when it first came out! I love this story! I hope your muse gets inspired soon!!
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I simply love this story beyond words. Again, THANK YOU for the new chapter. It was totally worth the wait. I can not wait for you to upload the new chapter.
person DAZ306
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow..that was HOT