rate_review Reviews

I like the beginning! I want to know more! Please continue!

I cant wait to see where you take this story ^_^

Allright, so I suppose I should tell you that first of all I thought it was ok. But, it could be better. I didn't understand some of it. But, I did get some of what was happening and I thought it was great. Just fixe some of your wording and it would be really good. Hahaha!!! I would love to see Sesshoumaru relaxing in a hot spring so close to InuYasha and the othes. It was be very ammusing and higly entertaining. So, anyways great first chapter, just fix up some spelling mixtakes and I think you would have a master piece. Sorry if this sounds like a flam. It isn't meant to be one.