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for Milk.

by amalovinit

person booghost
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's hot so far. I hope you update soon!
person sue
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EWWW, Omg hes drinking her jucises like if its tea! anywyas nice story lol keep it up and update too
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Milk!!!???? Okay... you've piqued my interest... Firsty cos Naraku is a hot hanyou who just freaking HOT! Secondly cos this chapter was so short that there's gotta be a twist. And Thirdly... our hottie hanyou has a fetish for milk... <_<...>_>...0_o??? Righteo sweetpea... Let's go see what all this 'milk' business is all about *0_o!!!!*
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*slides completely off the chair!* N-A-R-A-K-U – has – a – pleasure – chamber!?!!! *Slips over on drool trying to crawl back onto the chair!* And that’s just the first sentence of Chapter Two… oh happy hentai that I am… I didn’t need to read anymore than that but then!!!! *slips off of wet patch on chair and cracks head on the ways down!* The hottie hanyou has Kag’s chained up *Falls into twitching heap on floor* Remind me please to wear a bike helmet to avoid head injuries when I go to read the next chapter…. You are trying to freaking kill me! *gah!* Sweet mother of god… how many freaking hail mary’s am I gonna have to say over reading this??? Surely God wouldn’t be up this late would he??? That’s it… I’m going straight to freaking hell! Ohssss! The Butt plug *slides off chair again!!!* What time is it *checks watch* 2 more hours til my fella gets home *crosses legs* Nuh-uh… must-have-cold-shower…. YOU ARE EVIL!!!!
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 was kinky as hell... wows... was expecting more kinky hanyou fun on Kagome, but anyways... You are a riot! Naraku sitting back drinking a glass of some chicky's cum! Priceless! The chapters may be short, but you certainly don't muck around with the smut sweetpea.... I like it very much... CONTINUE! Now... where's my paddle? Naraku... Oh Naraku... bad hanyou... GO TO MY ROOM *HEHEHE* Time to play with my muses badgirl...
person bluemoon_175
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please you must write more. I have never been more excited to wait for an update. If you don't update the story soon I might start to cry. And, this story is keeping me on my toes. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. :^)
person Kags21
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, vwry hot and good update soo please