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for Milk.

by amalovinit

person PinkWoods
schedule February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I wish that you'd make the chapters longer and have more to them... I mean... It's like you just jump around, don't really tell us what's happening or anything.
person Jags
schedule August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
definitely interesting
person Anoxiaperson
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o 3o...

I'd never want any of THAT beverage.

hehe, continue. PLX?!
person ree
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really good! hope you're other stories are as good as this one was.
person Anon
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome\

person Call Me Carr
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is dreadfully lacking in detail and a good plot.
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im going crazy checking everyday to see if theres a new chapter!! your going to drive me crazy !!!!!!!!UPDATE, NOW!!!

person angel
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great .. please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person Anon
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love it pleeeeeeease keep writing more,
person jj
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
looks interesting please update soon!