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by IceQueenRex

person Kapitan Nemo
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah, you totally scared me at the end when you said "AND THAT'S THE END..." until I finished reading the sentence. (I was like, nooooo!!!)

I'm reeeally enjoying your character development...and just out of curiosity, did you take the name "Momo" from "Kimi wa Petto?"

Please update, you're wonderful! :D
person Satsuki
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story,can't wait for the next chapter.

Sighned,
Satsuki
person Black Hearts
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Interesting story...pretty good. I like Bankotsu stories and this one looks very interesting! Update soon!

BlackHearts
person Black Hearts
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha. I like how Bankotsu was sort of put down! Good chapter and definately thank your beta. The spelling and grammar is excellent!

BlackHearts
person Black Hearts
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What? You're going to Prague? That is so cool! I have a friend who comes from Czech Rep. But...you're not going to be able to update? Damn that stinks! But ah well. I think you deserve the break from typing. :D Well done with this chapter too. I personally ADORE the way you portrayed Bankotsu! It was very realistic. Well to what I think of him anyway! :D

BlackHearts
person Kagome_Inu_3000
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is turning out to be one of my favorites on the entire site, even though I usually go for the Inuyasha-Kagome pairings. It's beautifully written, and the story line is awesome. Not to mention, it's so much fun to read it. I hope you update soon, and I hope it stays as awesome as it already is.
person Kagome_Inu_3000
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
((Sorry- I logged in this time...))
This story is turning out to be one of my favorites on the entire site, even though I usually go for the Inuyasha-Kagome pairings. It's beautifully written, and the story line is awesome. Not to mention, it's so much fun to read it. I hope you update soon, and I hope it stays as awesome as it already is. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I'm definitely gonna keep my eye on this story... Good luck, and great job so far!
person Kaleigh
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. The storyline is great, and you write beautifully. Keep it up and update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!
~Kaleigh~
person bluemoon_175
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really good, I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work, I hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE! ! ! PLEASE! ! ! PLEASE! ! ! :^)
person Kapitan Nemo
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah...that was really impressive. When I first saw the summary of this fic, my interest was piqued, but I figured it'd be another half-baked shot of fun Inu-Yasha fandom. But I was pleasantly surprised! Not only is your grammar and spelling flawless, but your writing style is wonderful! You possess a refreshing width of knowledge of Japanese culture (I appreciated the last names you chose--FINALLY, the abuse of "Takahashi" and "Inutaisho" or "Teriyaki" as fanfiction surnames has come to a halt) and that makes your story much, much more credible than those online that automatically place their college characters into Tokyo U and don't give much thought at all into their setting, or any basis for their story at all, for that matter.
Also, thank you so much for creating such a splendidly long chapter! I can't WAIT to see how things turn out!