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September 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see more please update.
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July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this but I wish it was longer
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more
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August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well they say hand job. Sessy was fingering her in the story, that is why I put it.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what does hj mean????
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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok! So you deleted the flames. Ok! So you fixed the formatting. So...uh!!!...what did WordPad, your formatting, and your phone connection have to dow with your singular lack of proper use of a dictionary. A good grammar and spell check would help this thing some.
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey...there were two flames in here earlier...what'd ya do? Erase your bad reviews? Makes sense though, you need all the good PR you can get 'cause this story sux. BTW, Kag's dad's name sounds feminine and not Japanese...which is what Kag's is. You should do some studying on the culture and look up japanese names on babynames.com. They're pretty good about names.
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?