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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, well, this is most certainly different than the other fanfics you would find these days. I really am enjoying this! You keep Inuyasha in character, but at the same time, you brilliantly capture the reality and also dirty side of the other characters' personalities. But if anything, I really have to give you props for originality. Also, not only was it original, but it was well written too! While it's so easy to visualize your story, you throw in some pretty good vocabulary words here and there to modestly display your writing skill range.
As for me, it's getting late now and I think I'll finish this some other time this week with more reviews. ^_^
As for me, it's getting late now and I think I'll finish this some other time this week with more reviews. ^_^
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keke. i couldn't stop snickering while i read this fic. i felt so bad for inuyasha at the last chapter. and inufabio what? haha. awesome stuff. it's fricken hilarious and in character and hot all at the same time. very difficult to achieve. i hope you update soon. i'll be looking forward to the next update!
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you gnna finish this any time soon?
yeah, heads up.. pretty good you should
yeah, heads up.. pretty good you should
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the great work! I hope you write more soon! :D
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehehe Sometimes, he's just so stupid. Great chapter, cracked me up. I've read a lot of those "traditional" romance novels, where the guy is utterly perfect and all that bs... But I've read a lot more lately where he's NOT perfect and is sometimes stupid in the ways of "love." They're a lot more fun, kinda like this. Yours is still a bit more... male perspective oriented. I love it. Keep up the great writing, man!
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a great job with your story. Not only is it funny but its so sexy. I love how you've kept Inuyasha in character. All I can say is "poor Inuyasha."
Look forward until your next chapter,
Chanda
Look forward until your next chapter,
Chanda
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Does he love her? Cause thats all she wants.. is him to love her and care.. not call her a bitch and be an ass but to care for her like he cared for kikio
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe....funness ^_^!! Please keep up the good work and update again SOON ^_^!!!!!
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July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God I love this story. I love the torture, and can't wait till Inu actually gets some. I am, however having a great time seeing them get there! Your a wonderful writer, thanks so much for all the great work, can't wait for more!
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"My dick was bigger afterall"
that line is fcking great.
that line is fcking great.