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August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was greate, to bad he fucked up a littel at the end but hell, how the hell could he not say he loved her at that point. stupid yasha but it's inu we'r all talking aboute here so was else can we exspekt.
I love your writing so u better update soon u her, all be cheking up on u.
Peace & Love BastardOmega
I love your writing so u better update soon u her, all be cheking up on u.
Peace & Love BastardOmega
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter...the banana scene was great!
Look forward until your next update.
Chanda
Look forward until your next update.
Chanda
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't really believe you! That was... Good. A nice chapter with lots of citrus and excitement. I never really understood or liked the way guys think but after reading this chapter I started to feel a bit of sympathy. Also another thing: when they finally kissed for the first time and Inu got scared, I think that is love... :D Just don't forget to tell him so next time he won't fuck up again... :D
And last but not least: the way you described his feelings during the other kiss with using mostly words was just professional and a lot more telling than any other way would have been.
Congratulaion on this one!
And last but not least: the way you described his feelings during the other kiss with using mostly words was just professional and a lot more telling than any other way would have been.
Congratulaion on this one!
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY an update lol.GAH dammit Inuyasha! What is love?...come on,jeez! lol. So close,yet no cigar hehe.Loved the chapter,update soon.^_^
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great funny fic. Thanks for gifting us with your humor and wit. It is very difficult to write in first person and you've done a wonderful job. The grammar, spelling, etc., are an incredible relief. Wish I could be that mistake free! Will be doing a happy dance when I see the next chapter!
Snowfall
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to next chapter.:)
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to next chapter.:)
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
boy best figure out that he DOES love her....
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This had be drooling over the keyboard. I loved all the kisses and more, for real this time! Inuyasha's bumbling dialogue was hilarious, but can't beat his arguments with his dick.
"What he said. That was my dick again.
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Oh pick me! Piped my dick"
hahahaha! I got such a kick out of these lines. I really laughed, though, when Inuyasha asked 'what's love'. Poor little hanyou. He'd better get laid soon before he loses the power of speech completely and becomes a slobbering sex-maniac. Kidding, our Inu wouldn't do that but the voices are definitely getting to him. :)
"What he said. That was my dick again.
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Oh pick me! Piped my dick"
hahahaha! I got such a kick out of these lines. I really laughed, though, when Inuyasha asked 'what's love'. Poor little hanyou. He'd better get laid soon before he loses the power of speech completely and becomes a slobbering sex-maniac. Kidding, our Inu wouldn't do that but the voices are definitely getting to him. :)
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot damn that was wayyyyyyyyy hot!!! hot hot hot hot hot!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!