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for Hanyou Fantasies

by ButterYasha

person Steffaniey the Lavishly Splendid
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! That last chapter was hilarious!!! I loved your story! It kicked ass!!
person Lynn
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just loughed my head off. This epilogue was hilarious!
person Snowfall
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great and funny fic, lots of fun. We are starting to get some humor out there! Yay! Wish I could write humor. *sigh* No chance. Great and awesome job. Well written!

Snow
person chanda
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter... Too much.. I can't breath I'm laughing to hard. I loved it and yes it was proper to throw it into this story.


Chanda
person Hai Ikurei
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT SO MUCH! Hope u keep writing =D!!
I loved the end so cute and funny =3!
I just love how u write xD Keep up the good work! xD
Byeee!!!
Thanks for ending it so beautiful T_T
person Lynn
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Boy, was this worth the wait! My face is all red, though I have read tones of stories on aff, but it was a kind of realistic and very sweet lemon. Also, I've never seen a better way to describe love, ever. Your fic just about made me want to fall... ;)

I loved it from the beginning, how it was funny but I loved even more when it turned serious. I look forward to read more from you!
person inugirl2003
schedule August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I love this story! Was a great intense, sexy, romantic ending, I loved it. If you still wanted to add more, great with me!!! I would love to see group reactions, and how our lovebirds act infront of the others. I'll be watching for your smuttlets too. What a great writer you are! Thanks again!!!!!
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Definitely the best lemon I have ever read. His arguing parts had me laughing so hard and it was interesting following his efforts, failures, and thoughts. The descriptions were fantastic. It seemed so possibly in character too. Awesome!
person stella
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
one of the best stories i ever read!
fun and naughty at the same time.
hope to see more IY/K stories from you!!
person Sam
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OO the ending was PERFECT! not to serious you kept it light with the dick talking.. but I loved that you brought in his heart talking at the end :) :) :) :)