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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn... you are just horrible! hahaha
couldnt help but laugh though, shit give the
poor hanyou a fucking break... i really think that THIS Time..
should be reality and not a dream... the dream sequence
is getting hella old.
you have some spelling errors that i dont know how to
take... just htought you should know...
couldnt help but laugh though, shit give the
poor hanyou a fucking break... i really think that THIS Time..
should be reality and not a dream... the dream sequence
is getting hella old.
you have some spelling errors that i dont know how to
take... just htought you should know...
schedule
June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha he still hasnt gotten any. This is just mean to the poor guy. Well update soon please.
schedule
June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah!! LMAO.... That was great!! Fantastic!! Whoot!! Whoot!! Whoot!! Awesome!! I LOVED the new chapter!! It was, as Ron Weasley puts it, " Bloody Brillant"!!! I really, REALLY am enjoying this story... because it - hurts soooo goooood.. lol!! Kudos to you!!! The use of descriptions in your story so masterfully written and brillantly executed!! You are Brillant!! I have not come across another story like this since I have read A Romp in the Park that beautifully maintains the sexual tension without losing any of the intregity of the story!!! Both your and AlterFano's story are the only two I can assuredly say are awesome with achieving this torturous goal. ... So very primal and instinctive!!! Not only have you gotten and kept the raw, untamed animal sexuality, passion and magnetism going on; but there is also the sense of deep unspoken love that one has for the other and vice versa. .. Poor Inu. I don't know who I feel more for Inuyasha or Little Inu... lol..I think he just might Spontaneously Combust for all the unresolved tension. Poor Dog Boy- he can't seem to (giggles) catch a break. And the more the story progresses, the looser Inuyasha mouth and mind seems to get.... If he actually does get to make love to Kagome in real time and not dream sense I don't think she'll be able to walk afterwards with how tightly tensed up Inuyasha is becoming. Lucky girl.. lol... Your story is flowing so smoothly and blends so well from chapter to chapter!! You have certain achieved a deliciously torturous keep you hanging with no relief in sight atmosphere going!! I love the cliffies and I really LOVE the way this is progressing!! Awesome work!! And I can say you have at least one reviewer who is really enjoying the torture. I wonder if Inuyasha will have fantasies about 'breast 'sex? giggles... I am pleased by how true you kept the relationship and interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha!! Perfect!! And with Inuyasha mental comments about Kagome being blind was very funny.. in all honesty, she can be pretty oblivious at times.. Please keep up the most excellent work!! Can't wait for the next update... Please more torture!! Yah!! Thank YOU for sharing this story with us!! THANK You for writing it!! YOU TOTALLY ROCK!!!!
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is so funny...(I lost count at how many times Inu got dissed by his dreams)...Just hurry up and update soon!
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow..this is hott.
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is so hilarious. It's the funniest story I've read thus far. What's a guy got to do to get a little release? lol
I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!
Lexi
I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!
Lexi
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story its great. Poor Inuyasha though I kinda feel for him. If he doesnt get any anytime soon, I think that he will go insane. Well I love it update soon please
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story its great. Poor Inuyasha though I kinda feel for him. If he doesnt get any anytime soon, I think that he will go insane. Well I love it update soon please
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Now I really want to know where you are going with this story... It's pretty exciting! :D