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for Hanyou Fantasies

by ButterYasha

person katome
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you are one sick twisted genious....I love it!!
person NimbusPrime
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this fic! Best one I've yet read from any fandom. It has the perfect balance between sweet and sexy, angsty and hilarious, realism and fantasy, and barely any spelling or grammatical errors. You captured Inuyasha's character so well! His inner dialogue is just how I would imagine it to be. I also love how you contrast Inuyasha's real-life experiences with his fantasy ones. I adored the "It had seemed so easy in the dreams, why was it so damn scary in real life?" line. Also when Kagome says "I miss your claws." Loved those two, and I could spend half the day quoting lines that had me laughing out loud. Please keep writing! I've read your other two works already, and I know I wouldn't be the only one ecstatic to see more!
person Atelaar
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, very funny! And so well done. I've seen lots of people experimenting with the inner voices - but none of them carry it off as credibly as you do! Congrats!
person Amy-sama
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Grins* I can't remember laughing and giggling so much, as I did reading this little fic. Gotta love the inner voices that tells how things "should" be done. Who would have thought a penis would have so little to say but talk so much.
Anyway, I really enjoy reading this little fic, I hope to see more soon. And although I think Miroku's talks just as much, I'd imagine his would be a little more sly about it. After all his "smarter-then-me" voice is a perv too!
person LadyKagome07
schedule October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww! That was so frickin awesome! I love how you kept torturing poor Inuyasha until finally he gets the real thing. I also love the talking dick! That thing is so funny! You're great and the story is Hott and hilarious! I'd love it if you would email me back. I think this could be the start of a beautiful friendship. So awesome man!
---LadyKagome
person inugirl2003
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to know where I could have voted, was it this site? I hear about these contests, but don't really know where to go and vote. I would have defiinately voted this story as best lemon, it was fabulous!!
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA THAT'S RICH!
person chanda
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say congratulations. This story should have won, it was great.

Chanda
person silent pluto
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! this story was hilllarious!
You did not just make an epiloque from his 'tools' point of view!
Hah! Now that's truly unique!
lol
person szaugg
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
bwahahahahahaha. Damn funny. I love the conversation between the various and sundry Inuyasha bits. nicely done.