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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that was absolutely fantabulous. You have got to hurry and update, your killing me with the cliffhangers here. Please update soon and keep up the good work.
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent job. I normally greatly dislike songfics, because i think the lyrics interfere with the 'mood' of the fic, but you
managed to find a fitting song and not some mushy romance crap. Don't get me wrong, I'm all for romance, but this sort of
pairing,this situation, is just so much better. In chapter two though, you need to use shorter lines so that people with smaller
computers don't have to constantly move it back and forth. Also, be sure to keep your work of the same quality and not try
to force out chapters just for the reviewers. If they really want it that bad, they can wait for it. Quality is the most important part.
I've learned, though, that after sex that good (chapter 3) the girl tends to be rather sore in the morning, and has some trouble
with walking. ^.~ you've been added to my favorites, so I'll know when you update...expect more of my reviews for your stories from now on.
But if you do a bit of work that isn't good, I'll still criticise you. No one is immune from that.
managed to find a fitting song and not some mushy romance crap. Don't get me wrong, I'm all for romance, but this sort of
pairing,this situation, is just so much better. In chapter two though, you need to use shorter lines so that people with smaller
computers don't have to constantly move it back and forth. Also, be sure to keep your work of the same quality and not try
to force out chapters just for the reviewers. If they really want it that bad, they can wait for it. Quality is the most important part.
I've learned, though, that after sex that good (chapter 3) the girl tends to be rather sore in the morning, and has some trouble
with walking. ^.~ you've been added to my favorites, so I'll know when you update...expect more of my reviews for your stories from now on.
But if you do a bit of work that isn't good, I'll still criticise you. No one is immune from that.
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What's going on? Why have you no reviews sweetpea?! What a great start to a freaking hot crossover... man readers are getting slack on AFF.... As you know, I haven't been on AFF for quite some time (if you've still been reading Lessons and What Now) so I didn't have a clue that you actually wrote yourself or else I would've checked your fics out sooner, my happy lil' reviewer. The reviews certainly make all the difference as to whether or not your going to continue a story, so even if I have to come back to this story and review 50 bloody times till it piques someones interest to get off their slack arse and leave a nice comment... I shall.
You are truly a good writer... I liked this opening chapter... Please continue!!!
Peace Chigirl
The Sinner ^_~.... *runs of the check out Solace... *
You are truly a good writer... I liked this opening chapter... Please continue!!!
Peace Chigirl
The Sinner ^_~.... *runs of the check out Solace... *
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PS: Where is your other story Solace? Did you take it down? Put it back up so I can have a squiz sweetpea... F-cuk the other readers... if they're to lame to do the polite thing and review... let 'em go into a gigantic hentai hole... I'd like to see what you did... you got me wondering now... what pairings was it? Gods... if it were a Sango/Sesshie pairing and your holding out I'll have to throw a tanty! Put it back up and I promise I'll review and pass the story on to a few of my other hentai friends... Remember AFF lost a lot of authors cos of the dicking around they did revamping the site, and just as myself, there are some older readers coming back who did like to read and review... so hang in there a bit longer hey?
Ciao ^_^... hope to see Solace up and posted next time I check out to see if you've updated....
Ciao ^_^... hope to see Solace up and posted next time I check out to see if you've updated....