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by KishaW

person OriginalSinner
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 was so... *sighs wistfully* ... so... beautiful Chigirl *starry eyes*. I love the way you write. It's so freaking descriptive. I could just see that beautiful floral quilt loverboy made for Sango. What a paradise... *sighs again* Do you mind if I come over and we can play with your muses together? It seems like such a dreamy place to be.... *smiles in contentment* But then there's the raunch factor *eutopian bubble pops and Sinner falls into happy hentai land - yipeeeeeeee!* RRRRAAAAAWWWWRRRRSSS! Another hot chapter from the Chigirl... you make me such a happy little hentai ^_^
person howlingblue
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
soooo...... what's up with you?

I honestly can say I've been reading and enjoying your stories a lot, and when you start getting to the best part, you quit because of a "lack of reviews".....

no offense, but that's kinda lame.......

If you want to complete the story, do it because you want to, and if you don't want to finish it, do it because you wanna move on. Don't do it because you think no one cares, because you don't know that we don't.

Anyways, that's just my two cents, and here's a couple of quarters in the hopes that you finish either this or Solace.

~Howlingblue~
person mitsuki!
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHATEVER!! u r gonna finish this story cuz i LOOOOVE ITT!!!! i love it more than everybody! hahah keep up the greaaat work!!! cuz u r doing sooo good that its TOO GOOD!
person mitsuki!
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHH THIS STORY IS SOO GOOOD! it is very tastefully done! and i really hope to see the finish line! give it time and people will LOVE it as much as i do.. dont worry bout other reviews because this is fairly new... and is in the crossover catagory which ppl are little weenies bout looking for nething good.. but im telling you.. u r doing so GREAT! hahaha its the whole publicity thingy.. but on my fanfic site ill tell EVERYBODY bout ur story!
person Haruhi
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey LADY! this fic is the best ive read! so the plot thickens man you r good! i really actually found this by chance. But i think more ppl will wanna click the link if u had more of a "hook" in the summary.. because it doesnt give the story justice yenno! well anyways you are going great and i hope to see more updates!
person RubyRuri
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HEY is solace gone because of reviews?! aww MAn i LOOOVEd that story! and so does everybody else! dont take it away just cuz ppl arent leaving a review! you know how ppl r?! theyre lazy.. nonetheless appreciative! please continue
person OriginalSinner
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my lawd!!!! *Dripping off of chair into puddle on floor* That chapter just melted me away I swear! That was awesome chigirl... something to be absolutely proud of. Unfortunately I haven't heard Tori Amos's version of this song but could only here REM's rendition swirling around in my head, which kind of did me in cos every time I hear it, I think of the ex (it's one of his all time favourite songs), and as much as I love to hate the ex, I can't help but think back to the mind-blowing physical relationship I had with him and this fic just left me practically a sobbing mess. So very, very good badgirl.

I can't wait to continue with this story... it's blowing my freaking mind! Unfortunately I don't have a lot of time to read and every time I do get settled to have a read, I get interupted, so I'm quite pissed of that I can't just sit down and read this from beginning to end... I'm going to have to print it out! Thank God you keep updating sweetpea, so I won't be left in suspense!

Peace babe,

The Sinner
person OriginalSinner
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww *gushes* what a sweet, sweetpea you are Chigirl ^_^... that lil' bit at the end of your chapter (that would be chapter 3 I think... *short-term memory loss kicking in...doh!*) made me feel all warm and fuzzy... I concur girlfriend! Let's show these ecchi fiends here at AFF that there is life beyond Kagome and Inuyasha yeah ^_^. Anyways, I finally get to sit down and read the whole of this chapter (I don't get a lot of time to sit down in front of the computer... you can probably tell by my slack arse updates no?) I guess I should really be sleeping right about now, but fat chance of doing that after reading this *RAWRS* I finally sit back now I have some me time to read (without being disturbed) and tickle me pink... talk about being totally blown away! Girl, where have you been hiding? Why haven't you written anything sooner? You been holding out on us so it seems...What an awesome chapter! I swear I was on the edge of my seat there when Kurama was being the dreadful tease, on the verge of melting into a puddle and spilling onto the floor! I'm speechless hey. I've read some good fics but this one is hot girl. Its suspense and wry humour and hot characters are all making for a kick arse story you know this yeah. And I'm such a happy little vegemite cos you've updated again since I last hit here (and unfortunately didn't get very far in my reading efforts) so I've got some more scrummy, steamy (and I'll hold you to your warnings being the hentai that I'm sure you're well aware that I am) that there's gonna be some fall-off-your-chair-in-a-gooey-mess type, smut-filled chapters to go... Oh goody *clapping hands excitedly like a depraved hentai!*... lets see what happens when Sango catches up to her beguiling thief shall we? *~_^* >_>...<_<...~_^.... k... I'm off *hehehe*

Peace

The Sinner
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Freakin' awesome chapter, Chigirl!
Sango and Kurama were getting it on! lol! Wonderful chapter, I enjoyed it very much! ^^
Please update soon!
person mitsuki!
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHH!! that was the best youko sango fic ive ever read! u BETTER update cuz it was sooo goood! ahh loved it!