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for Destiny

by Deepika

person sma_orlando
schedule December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this really great story.
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story has such a promising beginning. I liked the twist at the begining with Inuyasha hating humans and Sesshomaru being the leader of the group. I really hope you continue this story. Thanks
person acr
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I find this fic quite interesting. Please update.
person kitty
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I'm really starting to like this fic.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
Please continue.^_^
person Stefanie
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're off to a wonderful start. I'm a big Sess/Inu fan and have read a lot of fanfiction about them, most of which use the same plot line, which makes finding this a real treat. I like the changes you made with the characters and story line without going overboard. I really can't wait to see what happens next!
person acr
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Though why, in this situation, would Kagome not stay on her side of the well? I would also like to see Inuyasha put up more of a fuss w/Sesshomaru. what was Kikyou's motive?
person GrayWolf
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
switching the characters around like that is a very annoying thing... i think i would have enjoyed the story better if it were like that. ah.. what a headach..
person nika1280
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I must say that I am impressed. This story has a lot of imagery, dialogue, action and story progression. I love the idea of Inuyasha as a fire demon (he sounds delicious). I like the fact that you kept the Kikyo betrayal, but gave it a different twist. I like the changes to the shard hunting party. Miroku, Sango, and Kagome were interesting and not too out of character. If the rest of this story is like this first chapter, I can't wait to read it. You're off to a good start, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next update!
person SparkAngel
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, i totally love this fic. its so well written and i loved your twists
i cant wait for the next chapter. Hope you udate soon!!!!