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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was awesome. I really liked please update soon. Why ist that wolf so annoying?
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, bravo on the new chapters (clapping happly). You do good work. Thank you!
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man....like I told one writer before..."What do you sleep on "STARBUCKS?!?!?!" .., Another good chapter, I love Ayame and Koga...I can't wait to see what happens next.....
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like the fact that Sesshoumaru showed emotion. They always make him so cold and uncaring but I like to think that he like that saying "still waters run deep" This was very good. Update soon
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is well done and very interesting. Clearly you haven't read enough bad lemons if you are being so hard on yourself. I thought it was way better than you gave yourself credit for. Trust me, they're some awful ones out there. My only advise is to use smaller paragraphs when you write. All in all great story! Can't wait to see what happens next! Will Rin meet Shen again? Keep up the good work!
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is Sesshoumaru going to an ass and deny Rin as his mate. I think that chapter 8 was great. Keep up the good work.
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this....Always!!!! ...Always there is one person who always starts some mess....I hope Rin will be able to handle all that will come next...update soon...
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow I didn't see that coming :D Hey you know what would make it more fun well not for Sesshoumaru to have Rin have a pup :D
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was great, Sesshoumaru should had thought to talk to Rin first, but that's life for ya, and no matter how far Rin goes her heart will always be with Sesshouamru. Keep up the great work hon *hugs*
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story, but you should tell your readers that Rin and Sesshomaru are OOC. But really good start...update soon...