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It's been a long time....I'm sad that Rin died :( ....There's got to be a way to bring her back...there just have to be....A what's up with Uki???? I wonder how he an his cousin will run Sesshomaru's land????? ...update soon....

*tears begin to stream down face* I love you! What a delightful story!!! I've been out of the works for awhile, now I'm back and got to enjoy such a great story! Holy crap, you rule! You started out alittle shakey with your first few chapters, but geez, this story has turned out to be something else!! Hahaha.

I haven't read a story like this before. The plot is wonderful! The characters are tasteful too!! You kick ass on this story. Either way you choose to continue or even pop out a new story, be prepared for me to follow you! It's about time we got some different plots in there!

UPDATE or MAKE A NEW STORY!!! I'm in waiting, hop to it!! Blah, I'm so excited, how cool of you!!!

~sniff sniff~ wow that was great i love it .. please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

i really like this story. But there are a couple of things that make me laugh. Like rin staying with the wolf trib. I think that would be the last place she would go, and esspecially getting help from kouga. But, besides that, its good.

I read all of it! 3 hours! I enjoyed every single chapter! ^.^v you're so awesome. I love all your OCs too! I wish to hug cute Ukiyo! So cute!

this was very good. update soon

Awww Sesshoumaru is now knows how much he loves Rin and always will, some guys you think they would know if they love you or not, it shouldn't take them years to see that, but then its Sesshoumaru and he had a hard time letting you know how he feels. But I like this one a little better, like I said before if they would show more of Rin and Sesshoumaru we would see that he loves her. *smiles* *hugs*

First off, the good - very interesting storyline, and I love the time setting that you chose. It's a grown up Rin story without having to rush her through puberty. I also thought it was cool that you worked Kouga and Ayame into the storyline, and it was refreshing to see the whole Kouga/Inuyasha/Kagome triangle resolved.

Now, the suggestions - While I admire your attempts to update everyday, the latter chapters felt very rushed and not as well thought out as the earlier chapters. Also, Sesshy was not only OOC in the last chapters, the reconcilation of Rin, and then finding out and accepting that he had a son was hastily put together. As much as I am rooting for the happy ending, Sesshy is a complex character, and I just think that he would've need more time to digest and deal with the big changes in his life. Lastly, you seem to be a creative writer, which is why I was kinda disappointed in reading about why it took Sesshy years to get to Rin. He's resourceful, powerful, and ruthless, and if he wanted to get to Rin, I doubt anything sort of decapitation would've stopped him.

I hope you don't take the suggestions personally. I feel that a interesting and creative story such as yours deserve a thorough review, and that you shouldn't sell yourself short by imposing sucha rigid timeline on yourself. Deadlines are important, but not so much so that it impedes the quality of your work.

Good luck, and I hope you keep writing!

WOW!!!^_^ Finally a Rin/Fluffy story where Rin doesn't get raped (especially when she's still eight) I hate it when people do that. Anyway, excellent fic. A job well done. You had me hanging on the edge of my seat half the time.^_^ Is there a second season? I hope so!^_-

First of all, let me say that I enjoyed reading your fanfic! I enjoyed it so much that I read it in three days; it was so addicting! Secondly, I love seeing Sesshomaru with a heart. Who could have thought that it would even be possible for someone to be able to pull it off? So props to you on that! And thirdly, I think it would be really cute if you wrote a Sequel with the boys grown up or something. Maybe give them a new, stronger Naraku-type demon to fight or something.. Just a suggestion!