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This is great so far; please update & finish it soon!!!

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Oh boy u must finish this story!PLEASE???? I am dying to find out what's next!!

Will you be continuing? The Story is lovely and I really want to know how it ends. Riki and Uki are so cute together.

I really like this story...up until chapter 20. It went downhill after that. I think you should have started a different story if you were going to end the other one so suddenly.

I could see how yaoi would have that effect on some people, but what you have to remember is: In the end, its about what you want to write, not what we want to read. If people dont like a fanfiction, they should go write their own. (personally, i go whateverwhichway in taste... so nothing really bothers me much). Oh yes, Uki and Riki. You did an amazing job in this previous chapter. That was so realistic, i couldve sworn i was reading a journal. I'm also hoping for Rin's return. (mostly because thats the reason i started reading). I'm one of the bigger Sesshy+Rin fanboys. Anywho, dont overexert yourself... the last thing you want to do is burn yourself out. I wish your muse bring you inspiration. Best of luck.

God, I bow my head in shame for not reviewing the latest chapteres, though I am so glad that you decided to continue your story. Truth be told, the yaoi, even one-sided was quite clearly seen coming, since Ukiyomaru`s feelings have been a big issue for quite a few chapters now. Yet, I still think the way you described their relationship so far is very nice and realistic too, with all the conflicting emotions being shown and described. To Rin, if you make Sesshoumaru fail, then you may scrap half the story, and move it into another section as well. so I do not think he will fail. The technique he will use is quite interesting, especially in it`s way. Though the question remains, what about memories? Will Rin remember everything? I really hope you update soon. The description of the netherworld was heart-breaking meeting the others there. What I also wonder at is the problem of her body. Rin is currently a ghost. interesting... There is as of yet no sign of Urasue yet, soo interestin situation. Update!!!

No! dont say that! it's not true. I'm sure people just have gotten out of the habit of checking this story for updates. It doesn't mean we're not interested. Well, at least I am!

Anyway, the last four chapters are brilliantly written- a welcome sight to behold after your return. And, as always, it is pleasing to read the on-going saga of Riki and Uki. (my vote for best original characters ever). So i read your latest chapter: Rin and Sesshomaru leaving the netherworld and Uki coming out to Riki. Very dramatic, very well orchestrated, very satisfying- i must admit. Looking forward to updates; especially if you continue this quality.

omg... new chapters! I've been waiting forever! I'm so glad you updated!

Your story is excellent and the way you portray Sesshoumaru is vey nice. There is one thing I do not understand though. Why hon`t you update this story. You already have a huge storylinegoing on and yet you decided to abandon it. Why? Please continue this story and post more chapters, Sesshoumaru`s quest to save his beloved Rin needs to be completed. The new technique that you describe is so interesting, and of course the adventures of Riki and Uki, should be completed as well, so please I beg you, update this story ASAP.