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for Demon Slayer Sango

by PinkRoseBouquet

person Original Sinner
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Crikey Sweetpea... I'm completely blown away by your writing. You are one talented chickybabe, but I'm sure I don't need to tell you that. I am so thoroughly enjoying this story. I didn't realize that you had already posted it. I've been pretty slack on AFF the last ... geez.... freaking months and months now. Life kinda came and gave me a harsh reality check... I guess that's it, or else I would've picked up this story in a flash! Hot stuff yeah? I have to admit though, I had to skip forward to the lemon (being the hentai'd freak that I guess you've probably pegged me for since you've been reading What Now?) and I have to say it totally rocked my socks babe *heeeheee* I don't get much of a chance to read lately so I've been pretty frustrated at the fact that I haven't been able to sit down and read this fic from beginning to end... and then I go to your profile and find there's another 20 chapters to go! *yippeeee!* Happy little vegemite am I *claps hand excitedly* Tell me? Is the original story different from this? Like, as you know, I'm in the process of tarting up What Now? and the version now posted is somewhat different from the old one... Should I just continue reading this or should I just continue reading the original version? ie... are there any differences between the two?

Either way, you have a devoted reader in me... love it sweetpea...

Peace,

The Sinner ~_^
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, this story just keeps on getting better and better! I’ve only just read chapter two*doh!* I was hoping to have read more after I first checked out this story, but unfortunately, I have little time for sitting in front of the computer reading *sighs* Anyways, I love the way you are pacing this story. I can see just from what I’ve already read that it’s going to be first class. I just love the little inner reflections you have the characters indulging in. It makes this story a notch above the rest I’ve read in a very long time. Only, I can’t understand why on earth you have no reviews! Geez the readers here on AFF are getting slack. I’m going to recommend this story next time I post a chapter (I’m writing a Sango/Sess story as well) so hopefully a few of my readers will catch on to this tasty little morsel. It is indeed worthwhile checking out, and thank god, I’ve got a few readers that do the right thing and review, which kind of makes the whole effort of writing a story pay off. And you’re up to chapter 8 already! Can’t wait to read more ^_^ I don’t think I have to tell you this, but you’re doing great.

Peace, The Sinner ~_^
person OriginalSinner
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How funny is that?! I must've been reading and reviewing your story the same time you were doing mine ^_^ *twighlight zone music playing in background* Freaky yeah? *hehehe* Ohs... how stupid do I feel? I went to your profile and saw that you've had heaps of hits and stacks of reviews *doh!* But I still am going to give this story a shout when I post my next chapter, cos after picking myself up off the floor after I slid off my chair from reading Chapter 8 (crosses legs... uncrosses... crosses them again... nuh... need a cold shower....) I think it very much deserves it! There are so few good Sango/Sess fics out there no? I'm so happy I found this...

Ohs... and thanks for the review... coming from a writer such as yourself, I feel very privelaged...

Cheers ^_^
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh goody, goody gum drops! You have made me one happy hentai... Finally, another Sesshoumaru/Sango fic! And it is soooooo well written. Aren't they just the hottest couple in Anime-dom? I could almost feel the heat prickle at Sango's collar at having the haughty puppy looking her up and down. Your descriptions are very detailed and vivid and you have to update soon yeah? Ohs, and I like how you've got Sesshoumaru in character... Couldn't you just take to the arrogant pup with a rolled up newspaper? Actually, I personally could think of a lot of things I'd like to take to the hotdog *hehehe* but I might just save that for a story... might make for some good reading *tehehe*

Keep up the good work...
The Sinner ~_^