rate_review Reviews

very well done. i'm sitting here crying like a fool.

Wow!! I really liked your story. The ending was kinda sad, but it was still beautiful.

Wow. That was just....Wow. You pulled it off. THE perfect one shot. You fast-forwarded enough to make the plotline work; you kept them reasonably IC (and comeing from me, the QUEEN of All Nit-Pickers, that is saying something); the lemon was great, and tastefull; and the ending was all tied up so we weren't left hanging. It had me crying, but the ending was quite fitting, I liked it very much. I really liked how it didn't end "...And Kagome and Sesshomaru lived happily ever after when they relized they truly loved each other and the Great Jerk Himself (Inuyasha) was done away with." like so many Sess/Kag stories unfortunatly do. This could well fit with cannon. You portrayed this couple as not really ever working, which is how it would most likly be. It was well written, well thought out, and actually had a plot. The problem with so many one-shots is that they end up as PWPs. Your's was different; it HAD a story to it. It was short, but very good, just how I like it. It makes me want to read more of your work. All in all, I give this two thumbs WAY up, and shall reccomend it to my friends. Keep up the great work.


Kiyoko -(------

It was a great one shot! Just so sad at the end. :)

I dont even know what to say... I am really not into these kag/fluffy pairings... they make sesshoumaru so OOC....

This truely touched my heart and as sad the ending was I loved it at the same.

awwww that was so good lovely story! ^_^