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^,^ oi~ that was awesome, great work.

awww, he's human, but yea kagome's back. great story, I love it. ok, goingto go read pt 3

You need to shorten your breakers between sectoins: a LOT. They are forcing the text to go so wide that it is way off of the screen and impossible to read without a lot of scrolling back and forth. You will make this easier for people to attempt to read it if you will correct it. You don't need anything more than ~*~ or the like, and it won't play havoc with the formatting.

wow, fucking love it! I am like hooked, i had to go back and read the first part, hehe
its sweet

can't wait to see what you are going to have happen...

I CANT BELIEVE he gave up his hanyou .. youkai for her life!! that's crazy!

you put sesshoumaru perfectly in character i appreciate that mucho.
you are talented, i just read this shit bc i cannot write to save my
fucking life... but this is some amazing shit.