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oh whoops.. i meant to write Je Ne not Jace... oh well...

anywho gorgeous ... I am off to read a few more of your others that Have been
updated...

cant wait to see how things blow over with mama... and of course.. haisurah...

what a great character.\

Spence.

omg... spence wow... thanks? haha please dont flatter me..I'm not that pretty...

men... such fickle creatures.

THANKS FOR READING!! i love my readers that actually take the
two minutes to actually leave me a response... please...
review and tell me your feelings on this peice! and THANKS so much to all you people
that are commenting on here... you will never know how gracious i am.

Heather.

Aww she lost the pup? *sobs and curls into a little ball in the corner* jk I find this chapter sad but heart warming, Though the thought of Kagome losing Inuyasha's pup is still very saddening...(wonder how Kagome will take it????....!!!) Anyways keep up the great writing I just read it tonight and I hope things turn up. Loving it so far, in other words keep it coming. *gives two thumbs up*

Your writing is VERY good! I'm on edge for the next chapter, and your hint of "plans" enthralls me xD

I have been reading this story as of late, and I must say you are keeping my interest quite well for many reasons. Firstly I love the fact you have been able to keep all the characters in character (hate it when people make the characters curse, or say current time phrases that they wouldn't have said back then.) Secondly, I like the plot of the story, along with the twists and turns. So this new creature has already wiped out naraku huh? Will she use the sacred jewel for evil gain? What is going to happen to Kagome, and the "pup" she is carrying? Please continue this story OH PLEASE!! I have sorta become your #1 fan after reading. You keep the characters true, the plot is invigorating to read, and I have to admit you can really write your lemon scenes(IOW; you have written those parts in ways I haven't seen before, I am deeply appreciative of the fact you are steering clear of the "dirty language") In short please update soon I will be waiting for the next chapter. P.S: I hope you find time to write...this is quite a nice talent you possess.

I love this you have no idea! i like how ur chapters are considerably long and not hella short... i love this becuase i could see it happening in the actual anime... it SO SHOULD! i cant wait to see what you are going to do with this Haisurah character and the baby and all....

THANKS FOR WRITING THIS!!! pleasee finish!

wow... now THIS is a good fan fiction... i love how you stay
very true to character not really going to the OOC issue that
I see in a lot of Fan Fictions. The format issue seemingly
resolved itself after the first chapter that i noticed. please
continue to write on this Fiction, this would be a shame to just
drop and stop writing on. Keep those idea's flowing! I am curious
as to what you are going to do with this character Haisurah
that you created...

Keep it up kid! or adult... haha whatever.
You are so talented, i read some of your other stories and
I just thought you should know, although you probably get it
all the time.. you are very talented... it is apparent that you watch
or read the manga or anime and take a DEEPER look at the
characters being presented to you. THAT is a writer.!

Kimie