rate_review Reviews

wow, this is a reaaly good story, i just read all 13 chapters straight.. its gunna be hard to wait for one at a time! please update soon!

I hate sounding like a broken record an all....but excellent on the new chapter. keep it up and u might be gettin paid for doin this. =)

I'll review no worries *helps up* please I hate seeing people beg....*strange thoughts brewing* anyways I did enjoy the chapter, was sad but not as bad at the last few. I do very much appreciate the update...I've been without a new chapter to read for a few days and its killing me! hehe just kidding but hey keep it up and keep those fabulous chapters coming.

Omg! omg! omg!!!!
I just LOVE this story! You muuuuust write more. Although there were one or two spelling errors(if you dish it you must take it haha), it was awsome. This chapter was so gut wrenching! I was on the edge of my squeeky seat!!

Seriously, I do like this story alot Heathe!

once again, u can hold a readers attention perfectly. i could barely look away as i read. damn good job. only have one piece of constructive critisism....next time battle dialogue comes...dont be so quick to pull out inuyasha's best attacks, remember, hes good with jus swingin the sword...without the wind-scar, or backlash wave....and dont forget about his 2 different claw attacks also... >=P

i absolutly love you.... absofuckinglutly

finish this pleeeeaase.. you are probably my favorite author now,
i love the incharacter... i love the plot.. i love how i am so fucking enthralled, i love how you make me wnat more... and you use such colorful expression and description to tell us what's going on... you are fucking GREAT

awwwe... finish

or i'll have to choke you with dental floss and duct tape you to the wall~

Oh thats right with Miroku if Naraku is technically gone, then his Wind tunnel shouldn't be in his hand anymoe...(in theory). Oh what is going to happen I mean, I know Kagome's mom is understanding but I have some bad feelings about how she might take it (shakes with suspence) Oh man will she be kind and loving? will she get angry and sad? Gosh keep it coming I am Loving this so much...What will she say to Inuyasha about this?..(thankfully her mother can't sit him...^^;; scary thought) I hope you update soon, and yes your chapters were a tiny bit short, But short and sweet is better then long and boring. (this story isn't one bit boring!) keep that magic in your mind flowing to your fingers my friend. YOUR THE BEST!

YOU HAVE TO TELL ME WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a fantastic work and please keep going or we will have to hang you from the ceiling by your toe nails and tickle you until you pee yourself and promise to make more. So write more ok? Thanks for the good read!

Holly s

This one is my almost completly and utterly my favorite fan fiction ever!

I am enthralled beyond words at the new character and the sadness that is resounding
throughout the entire plot as well as the very IN characterizations that you have
achieved... CLAPS ... i am very proud...

you by far are one of if not my ONLY favorite writer thus far on this site.

you seem to know what you are doing... and just for the record.. i visited your myspace...

such a beautiful girl writing such beautiful fan art is just astounding ... where on
earth do you find the time?
However you did.. i am glad you have... without your work.. the world of fan fiction would be at a
definiteloss...

THANK YOU!

Jace.