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Just read the story up to where they are in the hospital. What a wonderful story. Cannot wait to read about the "marriage" and hopefully they will be able to have children.

Cannot wait to see what happens next.

I really enjoyed the premise and plot to your story. It was well written, if a bit educationally wordy in the dialogue at times. I'm looking forward to seeing how you intend to continue to caress their burgeoning relationship and the interferance of their new enemy. I was iffy about Kagome's pregnancy at first, but I'm glad you later mentioned the fact that she hadn't really needed or thought of control methods. (She might need to pass some of the methods onto Sango. . .like Lemon juice dipped sponges inserted to the vaginal passage to help neutralize semin - probably started around this time and was used extensively, although in secret during the Regency Period). Good luck with the rest of your story. I'll be reading! :)

Dam girl you on a roll aren't you ^-^ lol keep it up your doing great I can't wait to read more!!!

Huge Congratulations!!! What a great story!!! I just got done reading all the chapters you have up so far!! I am anxiously waiting the updates!!

I just got finished reading all the way thru to the last chapter. . . . .I love this story. . .very well-written, and you've done really good with keeping everyone in character. . .I like that. . .Only thing that bothers me is that it seems like poor little Shippou has been almost forgotten, I know that everyone has Kagome adopt him in their stories, but that's great cuz she's really become his surrogate mom in the series. . .and it would be kinda funny to think of Shippou calling Inu "dad", or "daddy" just to annoy him even more. . .Oh well, It's your story, take it where you want. . .But please keep the good stuff comin!

it was great! i bet inuyasha wants toget some!{wink!wink!}

Wow this story is great a torture to know I can't read more. Thanks for helping me beta my story Battle Cry. Omg I would write more but I have to go to sleep for school tommorow. Eeeek well at least in 2nd period I'm taking a nice nap since my pre-algebra teacher to dumb to notice. Lol aight talk to you later. Ass far as I know your story is Kick-Ass lol. Take care. Oh and people get your lazy fingers to type some motivation for this Smart writer come on just say Good story I love it i'll spell it for you G-o-o-d s-t-o-r-y L-u-v i-t. Now copy those letters but with out the dashes yawn night peoples.

Omg I think I still can't get my eyes of the computer screen my eyes were so attached lol. Your doing a great great job love the story. Serioslly wow this is like the best fu**** story I have ever read!!! Woot woot you go Heather!

A very interesting chapter, so little happening in this one....but more than you know is being revealed, leaving you waiting for the next one. so do us a favor and get ur next one on the site. i need good reading, and its hard to find. unless im reading your stories. ;)

I sooooooo luv you for the tip on the Inuyasha clips. Your my new best friend :)