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ok, I just read the entire story up to this point and all i have to say is: PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!! I like the was it's going, a litte sad at the loss of the child but great recovery. please don't keep me waiting XxSangoxX - chan.

Arigato


Ja 'ne

Fantastic! When I started reading this story the day before yesterday, I just could not wait to get to the last chapter. I've been reading almost non-stop in all of my free time. I am so looking forward to finding out what's going to happen next. Will the evil villainness come back, or will she be reincarnated into something else? Please update A.S.A.P. The suspense is terrible.

Chapter 21 -- Thanks for the updates. His Demon taking over. Is this a good thing?

Can we say bi-polar? Kagome's emotions just jump all over the place for no reason.

Chapter 19 --- Nice "filler" chapter. Thanks for the update.

Chapter 18 -- Aww that was so nice.. Good think about them having kids, that is great. But was the abnormality in Kagome's blood? Might have to reread the story to see.

More, please! It's been so long since you updated! It's such a good story!

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hmm.. raymond... thank you for the second part of your review.... as for the first... The way I am portraying Inuyasha SOBBING and overtly clearifying his feelings.... for future knowledge you should know that it will all fit in to the plot of the story... it's alright to go slightly OOC because if you really took a deeper look at the character that Takahashi, Rumiko created you will see that those weak points are there....I like to bring the characters slightly OOC to remind you that these are portrayals of real people, that the situations that they are faced with inquire a lot of emotion sometimes.. that is hard to really express for some people. To open up your views on these said 'people' ... it really will help you to understand what and why everything is happening... as for the japanese... I am simply trying to add the small acknowledgment that they are in fact not speaking in english... it is not meant to throw my readers off and i apologize if it has, but it is why i only use small words within the text... a little reminder. I am also aware that some of the chapters are not ubber long, sorry if that irks ya, it's just things go slow sometimes and though i do not intend to create an excuse for this I think it only right that you are aware of the circumstances. When you read a book, not all of the chapters are equal in length... Sincereley i apologize for the irritation.

glad you enjoyed my ''sex scenes'' lol, those aren't easy to write when you are lacking in physical experience.

ok first the bad jap points,stoping here and their to ad jap ,hai ,baka are anoying to read sorta kills the mood i constantly see you jump out of character inuyasha sobing to much and explaining his feelings to clearly and your wanabe villan is to full of herself and doesant make clear what she wants sort of a bad filler.your chapters are too small tini tiny i need more



ok good notes great sex and you manage to capture all the emotions that usualy go on afterward .building the relationship foundation between selected characters is perfect and you dont neglect the seires in you stories you think like the characters and the decisions they would make CLAP CLAP CLAP CLAP not the easy thing to do and your habit of using fonts and sizes was great



sumary work harder remove jap text more sex maybe the mom toying with herself tone down our heros emotional broadcast and BIGGER BIGGGER CHAPTERS