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for His Lost Bride

by Roushijin

person Ana
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How could you? Cliffys are soooooo evil. Update soon. I can't wait to know what happens next.
person sphinx
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
orginally thought rin was a human in first chap, glad she wasn't one.. sess seems violent and easily provoked here. do update soon!
person Bandit
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please!Please!Please!Please!Please!
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Up date soon!!!
I NEED to know what happings next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ^-^ :P
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*0* NOoooo... A cliffy! This is getting really good I can't wait for the next chapter ^-^
person sarah
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WTF. you cant leave it like that. what are you thinking? you have to finish this, and you have to finish this NOW!
person dasie e wolf
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finish it pleasssss!!!!! i love it and i think others will to. can't wait to see what happens next.
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! What the hell did they see...damn...why a cliff hanger...amybe I might just jump off but then I won't get to read this oh so very good story I am interested in...but it is getting very good...update soon will ya!
person destiney
schedule June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting please continue
person Nathanlvr
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG what a cliffy.. grr you HAVE to update.. I want her to kick his ass I dont know why but it would be funny :)`
person Lisa
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting and exciting story is unfolding here. You have a good solid writing style which you use to bring your characters to life. Thanks for sharing.

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